Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Відповідь частково відповідає на запитання, але містить багато граматичних помилок і незрозумілих фраз. Використовуйте минулий час: “I had”, “I rode”, а не “I have” та “I ride”. Почніть із чіткої основної відповіді, потім додайте конкретну причину або спогад. Не використовуйте незрозумілі вислови на кшталт “I’m not circling anymore” і “house issues”; краще поясніть, що саме сталося. Відповідь варто скоротити до 2–3 логічно пов’язаних речень.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my sister around our neighbourhood, and we really enjoyed it. However, I stopped cycling after I had a bad fall, so I became a little nervous about riding.

Gợi ý: Відповідь не дає чіткої та завершеної позиції: початок “Oh yes” суперечить подальшій думці про те, що люди переважно користуються автомобілями. Сформулюйте однозначну відповідь, наприклад: “No, bikes are not very popular”. Виправте граматику: “In Ukraine”, “most people use cars”, “every family has”, а не “in Ukrainian”, “every people” та “have”. Додайте конкретну причину або коротке порівняння, використовуючи linking words, наприклад “because” або “although”. Уникайте зайвих фраз-вибачень і спробуйте завершити відповідь у 2–3 реченнях.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Ukraine. Most people use cars, and many families have one or two vehicles because they are more convenient for travelling long distances. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people and in large cities.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about a past situation during childhood, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have.

× When I was a child, I always ride a bike with my sister.

✓ When I was a child, I always rode a bike with my sister.

The phrase when I was a child refers to the past. Therefore, the past form rode must be used instead of the present form ride.

× But one day I thought that's why now I'm not circling anymore.

✓ But one day I thought that was why I did not cycle anymore.

After the past-tense verb thought, the following clause should normally use backshifted past forms: that's becomes that was, and I'm not becomes I was not or I did not. The expression cycle is also the natural verb for riding a bicycle.

× So I'm like traumatized for that.

✓ So I'm, like, traumatized by it.

The adjective traumatized is normally followed by the preposition by when we identify the cause of the trauma. The pronoun it refers to the previous experience.

× I think now because in Ukrainian we mostly use cars.

✓ I think that nowadays, in Ukraine, we mostly use cars.

The original sentence is incomplete because think needs a complete following clause. Adding that makes the structure grammatical. Nowadays is a natural adverb for talking about the present period.

× I think now because in Ukrainian we mostly use cars.

✓ I think that nowadays, in Ukraine, we mostly use cars.

Ukrainian is usually an adjective or the name of the language, whereas Ukraine is the name of the country. Use the preposition in with the country name: in Ukraine.

× Every people, every family have one or two cars.

✓ Every person and every family has one or two cars.

Every cannot be used directly with the plural noun people in this meaning. Use every person for individual people. The singular form every person correctly expresses the intended meaning.

× Every people, every family have one or two cars.

✓ Every person and every family has one or two cars.

The subjects every person and every family are singular, so the verb must also be singular: has, not have.

× A a quiet now.

✓ I'm quiet now.

The original sentence does not contain a complete verb phrase. The sentence needs the verb am, contracted as I'm, to form a complete sentence.