Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, because bike can take people to the where they want Besides guys can keep fate
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 你的回答重复了考官的问题,没有直接回答“有还是没有”。建议先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”明确作答,再补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的用途、购买时间或骑车地点。回答控制在2—3句话,并使用“because”或“when”连接信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it to school and around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 你表达了“自行车很受欢迎,因为方便且有助于保持健康”的观点,但存在明显的语法和用词问题。应使用复数“bikes”或不可数概念“cycling”,改为“take people where they want to go”;“guys”不适合这里,应该说“people”;“keep fate”应改为“keep fit”。建议用“Yes, I think so”直接回答,再用“because”连接两个具体理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips. Besides, cycling helps people keep fit and avoid traffic jams.
× Yes, because bike can take people to the where they want Besides guys can keep fate
✓ Yes, because bikes can take people to where they want to go. Besides, guys can keep fit.
表示自行车这一类事物时,应使用复数形式“bikes”,而不是单数形式“bike”。“people”是复数名词,因此这里用“bikes”更自然。建议在表达一类事物时,通常使用复数名词。
× Yes, because bike can take people to the where they want Besides guys can keep fate
✓ Yes, because bikes can take people to where they want to go. Besides, guys can keep fit.
“where”引导地点从句时,前面不能加定冠词“the”,所以“the where”错误,应改为“where”。例如:“People can go where they want to go.”
× Yes, because bike can take people to the where they want Besides guys can keep fate
✓ Yes, because bikes can take people to where they want to go. Besides, guys can keep fit.
“where they want”后面缺少动词“to go”,完整表达应为“where they want to go”。此外,原句把两个意思连接在一起,缺少适当的标点;应分成两个句子,并在“Besides”后加逗号。建议一个句子表达一个完整意思,并检查从句中是否缺少谓语动词。