Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do because a lot of people leave ten years bikes in my country and delivery sports fun, have fun with your friends friends and a lot of activities you can do.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, such as whether you had a bike, and add one specific detail about how or when you used it. Keep the answer to two or three natural sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I often went cycling with my friends at the weekend.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: You gave a clear opinion by saying that bikes are popular, but the supporting details are difficult to understand because of incorrect word choices, repetition, and unclear sentence structure. Explain specific reasons, such as exercise, entertainment, commuting, or delivery services, and connect your ideas with linking words like “also” and “because.” Avoid repeating words such as “friends” and use natural expressions such as “ride bikes” instead of “leave ten years bikes.”
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and affordable. Many people ride them for exercise, while others use them for commuting or making deliveries. They are also a fun way to spend time with friends.
× Yes, I do because a lot of people leave ten years bikes in my country and delivery sports fun, have fun with your friends friends and a lot of activities you can do.
✓ Yes, I do, because a lot of people in my country have bikes and use them for deliveries, sports, and fun with their friends. There are also a lot of activities they can do.
The original answer contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected phrases, such as 'delivery sports fun' and 'a lot of activities you can do.' The ideas should be organized into complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs. Use conjunctions such as 'and' to connect related items, and avoid repeating words such as 'friends friends.'