Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have. When I was a child I had two bicycles.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in Australia bicycle are very popular for short distance. People always ride a bike to go ghostly or visit the park or do some exercise.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,内容也清楚,但时态需要一致。因为问题问的是过去经历,应将“Yes, I have”改为“Yes, I did”或“Yes, I had.” 可以再补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车地点,使答案更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had two bicycles when I was a child, and I usually rode one of them to school and around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答了问题并给出了原因,但有几处语法和用词问题:“bicycle are”应改为“bicycles are”,“for short distance”应改为“for short distances”或“for traveling short distances”。“go ghostly”表达不清,可能想说“go grocery shopping”。此外,使用“also”或“because”等连接词,可以让信息衔接更自然;避免用“always”,因为并不是所有人都总是骑车。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Australia, especially for traveling short distances. Many people ride them to the shops, visit parks, or get some exercise. They are also a convenient and environmentally friendly way to travel.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题是时态和助动词不一致。问题使用一般过去时“Did you have...?”,回答也应使用过去时助动词“did”,不能使用现在时“have”。建议根据问题中的助动词和时态来回答:Did...? — Yes, I did./No, I didn’t.
× Yes, in Australia bicycle are very popular for short distance.
✓ Yes, in Australia, bicycles are very popular for short distances.
“bicycle”是可数名词,在这里表示澳大利亚普遍使用的自行车,应使用复数形式“bicycles”。“distance”在表示不同的短途距离时也应使用复数“distances”。建议表达一般性的复数可数名词时使用复数形式,例如“Bicycles are popular”以及“for short distances”。