Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bag when I was a child but the back was very little and I used the bag to learning balance and exercise my.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I thought it not very popular.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答中将“bike”误说成了“bag”,导致关键信息不清楚;“the back was very little”表达不自然,可能想说“自行车很小”;“used...to learning”应改为“used...to learn”。建议先直接回答,再补充学骑自行车的经历和用途。注意使用完整句子,并避免在结尾留下不完整表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. I used it to learn how to balance and improve my coordination. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 观点表达基本清楚,但“In my opinion”与“I thought”重复且时态不当;应使用现在时“I don’t think bikes are very popular”。建议补充一个具体原因,例如公共交通便利、道路不安全或天气炎热,并使用“because”连接理由,使答案更完整、更有说服力。
Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer using cars or public transportation because they are more convenient for long journeys. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people for exercise.
× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child but the back was very little and I used the bag to learning balance and exercise my.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but the bike was very small, and I used it to learn how to balance and exercise.
“to”后面应该接动词原形,不能接动词的-ing形式。因此,“to learning”应改为“to learn”。另外,“learn balance”表达不自然,通常说“learn how to balance”。
× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child but the back was very little and I used the bag to learning balance and exercise my.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but the bike was very small, and I used it to learn how to balance and exercise myself.
“my”是物主限定词,不能单独放在动词“exercise”后面。这里如果表示“锻炼自己”,应使用反身代词“myself”。不过,在这个语境中,直接说“exercise”也更自然。
× In my opinion, I thought it not very popular.
✓ In my opinion, I don't think bikes are very popular.
题目询问的是自行车在现在是否流行,所以应使用一般现在时。“thought”是一般过去时,不符合当前观点。可以使用“I don't think”来表达现在的看法。
× In my opinion, I thought it not very popular.
✓ In my opinion, I don't think bikes are very popular.
“bikes”是复数名词,因此不能用单数代词“it”指代。这里直接重复使用“bikes”最清楚;如果使用代词,应使用复数形式“they”。