Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly using the past tense: “Yes, I did.” Avoid repeating words and unfinished phrases such as “I I” and “that make.” Use a clear structure: answer, description, and supporting detail. Improve grammar by saying “I had a blue bike” instead of “I have a blue bike,” “I tried to follow my siblings,” and “a small, peaceful village.” Use specific vocabulary such as “mountains and farms” and connect the ideas with “because” or “so.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was a child, and I really enjoyed riding it around my small, peaceful village. I often followed my older siblings along the quiet roads near the mountains and farms.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and then support it with a clear reason or example. Replace unclear phrases such as “all this and child” and “child boys and girls” with “children, both boys and girls.” Use correct prepositions and articles: “in the afternoon,” “in the morning,” and “go to school.” Since “children” is plural, say “they feel healthy and comfortable,” not “it makes him feel.” Avoid repeating “bike” unnecessarily and use linking words such as “because” and “as a result.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Both boys and girls often ride them in the afternoon after they finish school. Cycling is popular because it is an enjoyable way to exercise, and it helps children feel healthy and relaxed.

× Absolutely, I have when I was a child.

✓ Absolutely, I did when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience, so the past auxiliary did is needed instead of the present-tense form have. You can also say, Absolutely, I had one when I was a child.

× I have a blue bike, which is an amazing thing.

✓ I had a blue bike, which was amazing.

Because the student is describing childhood, the verbs should be in the past tense: had and was. Use the past tense consistently when talking about completed experiences in the past.

× I I try to follow my siblings around small village.

✓ I tried to follow my siblings around the small village.

Tried is the past tense of try and is required because this happened during childhood. The definite article the is needed before small village because the speaker refers to a particular village. Also, remove the repeated subject I.

× We have a small quite peaceful very village with a lot of mountain and farms that make is that make.

✓ We had a small, quiet, peaceful village with many mountains and farms.

Had is needed because the sentence describes the village during the speaker's childhood. Mountains must be plural because there was more than one mountain, and many is more natural with the plural noun mountains. Adjectives should be placed before the noun in a clear order: small, quiet, peaceful village. The ending make is that make is incomplete and should be removed to form a complete sentence.

× You can find all this and child, child boys and girls riding this bike.

✓ You can find all these children, boys and girls, riding their bikes.

Children is the plural form of child, and these is needed with a plural noun. Their bikes correctly refers to the bikes belonging to the children. Make sure that demonstratives, nouns, and pronouns agree in number.

× They ride it at afternoon because at the morning they have a school.

✓ They ride them in the afternoon because they have school in the morning.

Use in, not at, with the time expressions in the afternoon and in the morning. Them agrees with the plural noun bikes. School is generally used without the article a when referring to attending school as an activity.

× So it's make him feel healthy and comfortable.

✓ So it makes them feel healthy and comfortable.

With the singular subject it, the present-tense verb must be makes, not make. Them is the correct object pronoun because it refers to the plural children. Remember to add -s to a present-tense verb after he, she, or it.