Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, when I was little my parents bought a bike for me and I liked to ride it to play outside with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Absolutely. In our country many people choose to ride a bike to commute to their work because it's very convenient and environmental friendly.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,内容也符合问题,但“ride it to play outside”表达不自然,建议改为“ride it outside”或“ride it around the neighborhood”。此外,可以加入一个具体细节,例如骑车的地点或感受,使答案更加生动。句子较长,可以用“because”或“and”更清晰地连接原因和补充信息。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was little, my parents bought me a bike, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 84.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,并提供了原因,但“environmental friendly”应改为“environmentally friendly”。“commute to their work”不够自然,建议使用“commute to work”。可以补充一个具体例子,例如短途出行或缓解交通拥堵,从而使内容更充分。注意在“In our country”后加逗号。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short-distance trips. Many people ride them to work because they are convenient, environmentally friendly, and help reduce traffic congestion.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Absolutely. In our country many people choose to ride a bike to commute to their work because it's very convenient and environmental friendly.

✓ Absolutely. In our country, many people choose to ride a bike to commute to work because it's very convenient and environmentally friendly.

“Environmental”是形容词,不能直接修饰形容词“friendly”。这里需要使用副词“environmentally”来修饰“friendly”,所以应改为“environmentally friendly”,意思是“环保的”。另外,“commute to work”是更自然、正确的固定表达,通常不在“work”前加“their”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Friendly— Affable; Amicable; Favorable; Compatible
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
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