Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接，但“Not yet”不适合描述过去，应该说“No, I didn’t”或“No, I didn’t have one”。“drove their car to take me away”表达不自然，容易让人理解为“把我带走”，建议改为“drove me to school”或“drove me to different places”。可以补充一个具体原因或例子，使答案更完整；目前两句话之间的逻辑也不够清晰。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents usually drove me to school and took me to different places by car, so I didn’t really need one.

Gợi ý: 回答包含观点和原因，但有多处词汇和语法问题。“garden price”应改为“gas prices”或“the cost of fuel”；“ride a bicycle”作主语时应改为“riding a bicycle”；“cannot only”应改为“can not only”；“release the energy”不自然，可用“get some exercise”或“burn calories”；“pollution of environments”应改为“air pollution”。建议使用清晰结构：先直接回答，再用“because”说明两个具体原因，并避免把多个意思塞进一个过长句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. This is because fuel is becoming more expensive, and cycling is an affordable way to travel. It also helps people get exercise and reduce air pollution.

× Yes I do because the garden price is a little high in my country and ride a bicycle cannot only release the energy and cut down the pollution of environments.

✓ Yes, I do, because gas prices are a little high in my country, and riding a bicycle can not only save energy but also reduce environmental pollution.

“ride a bicycle”在这里充当句子的主语，需要使用动名词形式“riding a bicycle”。另外，“gas prices”是更符合语境的表达；“save energy”和“reduce environmental pollution”比“release the energy”和“cut down the pollution of environments”更自然。

× Yes I do because the garden price is a little high in my country and ride a bicycle cannot only release the energy and cut down the pollution of environments.

✓ Yes, I do, because gas prices are a little high in my country, and riding a bicycle can not only save energy but also reduce environmental pollution.

固定结构是“not only... but also...”，表示“不仅……而且……”。原句使用“cannot only... and...”连接两个动作，结构不正确。注意应使用“can not only... but also...”。

× Yes I do because the garden price is a little high in my country and ride a bicycle cannot only release the energy and cut down the pollution of environments.

✓ Yes, I do, because gas prices are a little high in my country, and riding a bicycle can not only save energy but also reduce pollution in the environment.

“energy”通常是不可数名词，表示一般概念时不需要使用“the”。“environment”在这里表示自然环境这一整体，通常使用单数形式；也可以说“environmental pollution”。此外，回答开头应写作“Yes, I do”，需要用逗号隔开。