Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a bike between my 15 to 17. I often used it to go to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think so because I think, uh, electronic bike. Often, uh, you're late used more popular in our country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,也提供了使用场景,但时态和介词搭配不准确。应将“have”改为过去时“had”,并用“from the age of 15 to 17”或“when I was between 15 and 17”。可以增加一个具体细节,例如骑车上学需要多长时间,或说明骑车的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was between 15 and 17. I often rode it to school because it was convenient and saved me money on transportation. The journey took about fifteen minutes.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不完整,意思不够清楚。“electronic bike”应改为“electric bikes”,“are used more popular”应改为“are more popular”或“are more widely used”。建议先明确回答“Not really”,再用连接词“because”说明电动自行车更受欢迎,并补充具体原因,例如通勤方便、速度快。
Ví dụ: Not really. Although traditional bikes are used by some people, electric bikes are more popular in my country. This is because they are faster and more convenient for commuting, especially in large cities.
× Yes, I have a bike between my 15 to 17.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was between 15 and 17.
问题发生在过去(童年时期),所以应使用一般过去时。将“have”改为“had”。表示年龄时,应使用“when I was between 15 and 17”。
× Yes, I have a bike between my 15 to 17.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was between 15 and 17.
“between”通常与“and”搭配,不能与“to”搭配。此外,年龄应表达为“between 15 and 17”,而不是“my 15 to 17”。
× I don't think so because I think, uh, electronic bike.
✓ I don't think so. I think electric bikes are more popular in my country.
描述使用电力驱动的自行车时,应使用形容词“electric”,而不是“electronic”。“Electronic”通常表示与电子设备或电子系统有关。
× I don't think so because I think, uh, electronic bike. Often, uh, you're late used more popular in our country.
✓ I don't think so. I think electric bikes are often used and are more popular in my country.
原句中的“electronic bike”只是名词短语,缺少完整句子的主语和谓语。另外,“you're late used”不能表达“被使用”的意思。应使用完整结构“electric bikes are often used”。
× I don't think so because I think, uh, electronic bike.
✓ I don't think so. I think electric bikes are more popular in my country.
这里是在泛指一类自行车,而不是一辆特定的自行车,因此“bike”应使用复数形式“bikes”。
× Often, uh, you're late used more popular in our country.
✓ I think electric bikes are often used and are more popular in my country.
主语“electric bikes”是复数,所以系动词应使用“are”,不能使用“is”或错误形式“you're”。复数主语与复数形式的动词保持一致。