Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did and I learned to how to ride the bike from my father according to many times twice and I achieved.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, in my country many people can ride bike and I think ride bike can reduce the pollution and get more green environment. Also it is very convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 回答直接表达了“有”,但后半部分存在明显的语法和表达问题,例如“learned to how to ride”“according to many times twice”和“I achieved”都不自然。建议使用清晰的基本结构:先直接回答,再说明是谁教你的,最后补充学习过程或结果。可以说“my father taught me how to ride a bike”,并用“After practicing several times”连接结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father taught me how to ride a bike when I was about six years old. After practicing several times, I gradually became confident and started riding around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,也提供了环保和便利两个理由,内容基本有效。不过,“ride bike”应改为“ride bikes”或“cycling”,“reduce the pollution”更自然的表达是“reduce pollution”,“get more green environment”不地道。建议使用“because”和“Moreover”等连接词,并补充一个具体场景,例如短途通勤或共享单车,这样答案会更自然、更有说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them because cycling is convenient for short journeys and helps reduce pollution. Moreover, bike-sharing services have made it easier for people to use bikes instead of driving.
× Yes, I did and I learned to how to ride the bike from my father according to many times twice and I achieved.
✓ Yes, I did, and I learned how to ride a bike from my father after practicing twice. I eventually succeeded.
“learned to how to ride”结构错误。动词“learn”后面可以直接接“how to + 动词”,不能使用“to how to”。另外,“according to many times twice”表达混乱,“many times”和“twice”不能这样连用;“I achieved”后面缺少宾语,句子意思不完整。建议使用“after practicing twice”和“I eventually succeeded”等完整、清晰的表达。
× Yes, I did and I learned to how to ride the bike from my father according to many times twice and I achieved.
✓ Yes, I did, and I learned how to ride a bike from my father after practicing twice. I eventually succeeded.
第一次提到一辆自行车时,通常使用不定冠词“a”,所以应说“a bike”,而不是“the bike”。“the”通常用于双方都知道的特定事物。
× Yes, I did and I learned to how to ride the bike from my father according to many times twice and I achieved.
✓ Yes, I did, and I learned how to ride a bike from my father after practicing twice. I eventually succeeded.
“many times twice”数量表达重复且互相冲突。“twice”表示两次;“many times”表示很多次,二者不能同时用于同一动作。应根据实际情况选择一个,例如“twice”或“many times”。
× Yes, in my country many people can ride bike and I think ride bike can reduce the pollution and get more green environment.
✓ Yes, in my country, many people can ride bikes, and I think riding bikes can reduce pollution and create a greener environment.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类交通工具,因此使用复数“bikes”更合适,而不是单数“bike”。泛指可数名词时,通常使用复数形式。
× Yes, in my country many people can ride bike and I think ride bike can reduce the pollution and get more green environment.
✓ Yes, in my country, many people can ride a bike, and I think riding a bike can reduce pollution and create a greener environment.
“ride bike”前缺少冠词。单数可数名词“bike”不能单独使用,应该说“ride a bike”。如果表示泛指,也可以使用复数形式“ride bikes”。此外,“environment”在这里是单数可数名词,前面需要冠词“a”。
× Yes, in my country many people can ride bike and I think ride bike can reduce the pollution and get more green environment.
✓ Yes, in my country, many people can ride bikes, and I think riding bikes can reduce pollution and create a greener environment.
“ride bike”在句中充当主语,表示“骑自行车这件事”,因此动词应使用动名词形式“riding bikes”。不能直接使用动词原形“ride”作主语。
× Yes, in my country many people can ride bike and I think ride bike can reduce the pollution and get more green environment.
✓ Yes, in my country, many people can ride bikes, and I think riding bikes can reduce pollution and create a greener environment.
“get more green environment”中的“get”不能自然地表达“创造更环保的环境”。这里应使用“create a greener environment”。“greener”是形容词比较级,用来修饰“environment”。