Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I haven't have any bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not not popular, uh, because the mountain there, there are so many mountains in my city.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,但时态和搭配有错误。“when I was a child”表示过去经历,因此应使用一般过去时;“haven't have”应改为“didn't have”或“I never had”。另外,可以补充一个具体原因或相关细节,使答案更完整,例如说明你为什么没有自行车,或小时候通常如何出行。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was safer for me to walk or take the bus. I sometimes borrowed my friends’ bikes to ride around the neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 答案的主要观点不清楚,“Not not popular”应明确改为“they aren’t very popular”或“they are quite popular”。“the mountain there”表达不自然,应使用“there are many mountains in my city”或“my city is very mountainous”。建议先直接回答问题,再用“because”解释原因,并补充一个具体结果,例如山路陡峭导致人们更常选择汽车或公共交通。
Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my city. The city is quite mountainous, so cycling can be tiring, especially on steep roads. As a result, most people prefer to drive or use public transportation.
× No, I haven't have any bike when I was a child.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
“When I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此应该使用一般过去时“didn’t have”,而不能使用现在完成时“haven’t have”。另外,“bike”是可数名词单数,前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。
× No, I haven't have any bike when I was a child.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
“bike”是单数可数名词。这里表示“没有一辆自行车”,所以应该说“a bike”,不能说“any bike”。在肯定意义的单数可数名词前,通常需要使用“a/an”或“the”等限定词。
× Not not popular, uh, because the mountain there, there are so many mountains in my city.
✓ They’re not very popular because there are so many mountains in my city.
原句中的“because the mountain there”不是完整、正确的句子结构,而且“Not not”重复。回答“Are bikes popular?”时,可以使用主语“They”指代“bikes”,并说“They’re not very popular because...”来构成完整句子。
× Not not popular, uh, because the mountain there, there are so many mountains in my city.
✓ They’re not very popular because there are so many mountains in my city.
“the mountain there”部分缺少谓语动词,不能独立构成正确的从句。可以改为“because there are so many mountains in my city”,其中“There are”表示“有”。