Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike pedal when I was a kid and it's colored pink petribones on it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes it is popular in our country and most of the kids would like to have a bike and they practice at a young age.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Use “I had” instead of “I do have,” and say “a bicycle” rather than “a bike pedal.” Also, replace the unclear phrase “pink petribones” with a precise description, such as “pink patterns” or “pink decorations.” Add one specific detail about how you used the bike, while keeping the answer natural and within two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was pink and had colorful patterns on it. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: State the subject in the plural: “Bikes are popular,” not “it is popular.” Improve the linking and grammar by using “because” or “and,” and replace “practice at a young age” with the more natural phrase “learn to ride them at a young age.” Add a specific reason or example, such as bikes being affordable, convenient, or useful for exercise.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Many parents buy them because they are affordable and provide a fun way for kids to exercise. Most children learn to ride a bike at a young age.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike pedal when I was a kid and it's colored pink petribones on it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid, and it was colored pink with petribones on it.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past tense had instead of do have. Because the bike was pink in the past, use was colored instead of it's colored. Also, use and to connect the two related clauses clearly.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes it is popular in our country and most of the kids would like to have a bike and they practice at a young age.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, and most kids would like to have one and practice riding at a young age.

The subject bikes is plural, so use the plural verb are instead of is. When referring back to a bike, use one to avoid repeating the noun. The phrase practice riding is clearer and more natural than practice when discussing learning to ride a bike.

Present tense issue

× Yes it is popular in our country and most of the kids would like to have a bike and they practice at a young age.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, and most kids like to have one and practice riding at a young age.

The question asks about a general situation in the present, so use the present-tense verb like rather than would like. Use the present tense when describing what is generally true in your country.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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