Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly and then add one or two specific details. Replace unnatural phrases such as “very beautiful 1,” “have fun over on it,” and “spend a lot quality” with natural expressions like “it was beautiful,” “have a lot of fun riding it,” and “spend a lot of time together.” Avoid repeating “I had” and use a linking word such as “For example” to introduce a clear memory. Keep the answer to three or four coherent sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a beautiful bike when I was a child, and I had a lot of fun riding it. I often cycled around the village with my friends, especially during the summer holidays. For example, we used to race each other and spend hours exploring the area together.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear answer and avoid repetition, such as “in the in the” and “popular in my country, yes.” Use accurate and natural phrases: say “in cities and urban areas,” “people can use them instead of cars,” and “save fuel.” Explain why bicycles are popular and add a specific result, such as reducing traffic or pollution. Use plural forms consistently: “bikes,” “they,” and “them.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them instead of cars for short journeys because they can save money on fuel and avoid traffic jams. They are also environmentally friendly, so more people are choosing to cycle to work or school.

× I had a lot of fun over on it.

✓ I had a lot of fun on it.

The preposition over is not appropriate here. Use on when referring to an activity done while riding or sitting on a bike.

× I remember we used to spend a lot quality.

✓ I remember we used to spend a lot of quality time.

The quantifier a lot must be followed by of before a noun. Also, spend quality time is the correct expression for describing time spent enjoyably.

× Especially in the in the city and urban area where they can use it to save to replace the cars and save petrol.

✓ Especially in the city and urban area, where they can use it to save to replace the cars and save petrol.

The phrase in the is repeated. Remove the duplicate words so that the prepositional phrase begins with especially in the city.

× Where they can use it to save to replace the cars and save petrol.

✓ Where they can use them to save to replace the cars and save petrol.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Therefore, use the plural pronoun them.

× Where they can use it to save to replace the cars and save petrol.

✓ Where they can use them to replace cars and save petrol.

The sequence save to replace is incorrectly structured. Use the infinitive to replace followed by the coordinated verb save: to replace cars and save petrol.