Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and separate your ideas with linking words and appropriate punctuation. Say “a pink bike” instead of “in the pink color,” and use “my friends were jealous of it” rather than “envied me a lot about that bike.” Avoid repeating “I used to” and make the answer sound more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, it was a birthday present from my parents when I turned ten. It was pink, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. They were quite jealous of it because it looked really attractive.

Gợi ý: Your answer has a clear opinion and relevant reasons. Improve the grammar and accuracy by changing “prices are affordable” to “they are affordable” or “bikes are affordable,” and correct the typo “buys” to “bikes.” Use a linking word such as “Moreover” before the second reason and add a specific result or example to make the answer more effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam because they are relatively affordable for most people. Moreover, they are convenient in crowded cities, where the streets are often narrow and traffic is heavy. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work because they are cheaper and easier to park than cars.

× Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child it was my tenth birthday present from my parents.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. It was my tenth birthday present from my parents.

The original contains two independent clauses joined without appropriate punctuation. Separate them with a full stop, or join them with a suitable conjunction such as and.

× It was in the pink color and I used to ride my bike around my neighborhood and my friends envied me a lot about that bike.

✓ It was pink, and I used to ride my bike around my neighborhood. My friends envied me for having that bike.

The phrase in the pink color is not natural English. Use the adjective pink directly. Also, envy is followed by for when explaining the reason for someone's envy; about is not appropriate in this sentence.