Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Actually not I did I'm so regret I didn't have one
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Not really, I have to say, but the types of electric bikes are more popular in the normal people obviously I had one and I read my
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答基本表达了“没有自行车”以及遗憾,但语法和句子结构不准确。“Actually not I did”应改为“Actually, no, I didn’t”;“I’m so regret”应改为“I really regret it”或“I regret not having one”。建议先直接回答,再补充一个具体原因或感受,并使用逗号和完整句子使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Actually, no, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I really regret it because I couldn’t ride around with my friends after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答包含“普通自行车不太流行、电动车更受欢迎”的观点,但后半部分“I had one and I read my”表达不完整且意思不清,影响连贯性。应使用“However”或“because”等连接词,并准确使用“among ordinary people”而不是“in the normal people”。建议补充一个具体原因,例如电动车方便、适合通勤,同时控制在2至4句话内。
Ví dụ: I wouldn’t say traditional bikes are very popular in my country. However, electric bikes are quite common among ordinary people because they are convenient for commuting and do not require much effort. I often see them on the roads during rush hour.
× Actually not I did I'm so regret I didn't have one
✓ Actually, no, I didn't. I really regret not having one.
原句把多个分句直接连接在一起,缺少正确的标点和句子结构,导致表达不清。可以将回答拆成两个完整句子:先回答“没有”,再说明自己对此感到后悔。
× Actually not I did I'm so regret I didn't have one
✓ Actually, no, I didn't. I really regret not having one.
问题是关于童年时期的经历,因此回答应使用过去时。否定回答应使用过去时助动词“didn't”,而不是“I did”。注意:“didn't”后面的动词使用原形,例如“didn't have”。
× I'm so regret
✓ I really regret not having one.
“regret”是动词,不能放在“I'm”后面直接作表语。表达“我很后悔”时,应使用“I regret...”。此外,“really”可以修饰动词“regret”,比“so regret”更符合语法。
× the types of electric bikes are more popular in the normal people
✓ Electric bikes are more popular among ordinary people.
表示“在某一群人当中”时,应使用介词“among”,而不是“in”。因此应说“popular among ordinary people”。“ordinary people”表示“普通人”,比“the normal people”更自然。
× Not really, I have to say, but the types of electric bikes are more popular in the normal people obviously I had one and I read my
✓ Not really, I have to say. However, electric bikes are more popular among ordinary people. Obviously, I have one, and I ride it.
原句包含多个独立意思,却没有用句号或适当的连接词分开,最后的“I read my”也没有形成完整、清楚的表达。回答这类问题时,应将不同观点分成几个完整句子,并使用“However”等连接词使逻辑更清晰。