Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bag when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, back bags are popular in my country because everyone can use that and it's cheap.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 0.0Gợi ý: 你没有回答考官的问题,而是反问了一个关于书包的问题,因此内容相关性和基本结构都很弱。应该先直接回答“有”或“没有”,然后补充一个具体细节,例如骑车的频率、用途或童年经历。注意不要重复考官的问题或改变话题。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I often went cycling with my friends at weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 你的回答与问题部分相关,因为你提到了“popular”,但将“bikes”误说成了“back bags”,导致核心意思错误。应直接说明自行车是否流行,并使用正确的代词和表达,例如“they are affordable”而不是“everyone can use that”。你还可以通过具体人群、地点或原因扩展答案,使内容更清晰、更有说服力。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and young adults. They are affordable, convenient, and useful for commuting short distances, particularly in crowded cities.
× Yes, back bags are popular in my country because everyone can use that and it's cheap.
✓ Yes, back bags are popular in my country because everyone can use them and they're cheap.
“Back bags”是复数名词,因此不能用单数代词“that”来指代,应改为复数宾格代词“them”。后面的“it's”也是单数形式,而“back bags”是复数,所以应改为“they're”。注意代词的单复数必须与它所指代的名词保持一致。