Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and use the past tense consistently. “Have” should be “had,” and “when I was injured” does not fit the question; you probably mean “when I was young.” Also, clarify the second sentence because “treated by my son” is unnatural in this context. Add one specific detail about how you used the bike, such as where you rode it or who taught you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike, and my father taught me how to ride it in our neighborhood. I used to ride it with my friends after school.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence and support it with understandable reasons and examples. The phrases “I can be bike,” “convolved writing on,” and “my nation” are unclear or unnatural. Use “bikes are becoming more popular in my country” and explain why, such as their low cost, environmental benefits, or usefulness for commuting. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example” to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are becoming more popular in my country because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, many people ride bicycles to work or school to avoid traffic and reduce transportation costs. Cycling is also becoming more common as a form of exercise.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was injured.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense form had instead of the present-tense form have. Also, when I was a child fits the question more appropriately than when I was injured.

× I have a toy bike which was treated by my son.

✓ I had a toy bike which was treated by my son.

Because you are describing a bike you had in the past, use had instead of have. The clause which was treated is already in the past tense.

× Yes, I can be bike far more popular in my nation because I've even convolved writing on.

✓ Yes, bikes can be far more popular in my country because I have even seen people riding them.

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular noun bike. The plural subject also makes the sentence clearer and more natural.

× Yes, I can be bike far more popular in my nation because I've even convolved writing on.

✓ Yes, bikes can be far more popular in my country because I have even seen people riding them.

The modal verb can must be followed by a suitable subject and the base form of a verb. The natural structure is bikes can be far more popular, not can be bike. Do not place the singular noun bike directly after can in this sentence.

× Yes, I can be bike far more popular in my nation because I've even convolved writing on.

✓ Yes, bikes can be far more popular in my country because I have even seen people riding them.

The original sentence is difficult to understand because the phrases can be bike and convolved writing on do not form a clear grammatical structure. Use a complete clause with a clear subject, verb, and complement. A useful pattern is subject + modal verb + be + adjective phrase, followed by because and a supporting reason.