Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question more directly at the beginning by saying that you did not have a bike. Improve grammatical accuracy: use “bikes” instead of “bike” after “friends had,” and say “while I was practising” rather than “when practicing.” The final sentence is unclear and does not add relevant information, so remove or rewrite it. Use a linking word such as “Unfortunately” or “As a result” to connect the accident with your decision not to get a bike. Keep the response concise and specific, with no more than three or four sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Some of my friends had bikes, and I occasionally practised riding with them. Unfortunately, I had an accident once, so I became afraid of riding and never asked my parents to buy me one.

Gợi ý: Begin with a natural direct statement such as “Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country.” Avoid the unnatural phrase “Very well” and the repeated idea about children riding bikes. Use correct plural forms, including “kids riding bikes,” and explain that “okada” refers to motorcycle taxis if that is what you mean. Improve the comparison by saying “faster than taking a taxi” rather than “quicker compared to cab.” Organise the answer with a reason and a specific example, and avoid ending with “OK,” which sounds unnecessary.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially among children and motorcycle-taxi drivers. In fact, motorcycle taxis, which we commonly call “okadas,” are widely used because they are fast and convenient. They can often get through traffic more easily than cars or taxis, although many people still prefer cars for longer journeys.

× Growing up I didn't have a bike, but I had friends who had bike.

✓ Growing up, I didn't have a bike, but I had friends who had bikes.

The plural noun friends requires a plural noun when referring to the bikes owned by multiple friends. Use bikes instead of bike.

× The one time I could have actually gotten a bike when practicing with my friends I had an accident so it totally discouraged me from getting a bike.

✓ The one time I could have actually gotten a bike, I had an accident while practicing with my friends, so it totally discouraged me from getting a bike.

The original sentence needs clearer clause organization and punctuation. Use commas to separate the introductory and dependent information, and place while practicing with my friends next to the action it describes.

× But my brother actually got home when we were growing up and my friends.

✓ But my brother actually got a bike when we were growing up, unlike me and my friends.

The original sentence is structurally incomplete and does not express a complete comparison. Got home does not fit the intended meaning; got a bike correctly completes the verb phrase.

× Very well, bikes are still very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are still very popular in my country.

Very well is an adverbial expression meaning in a good manner, so it is not suitable as an answer introducing an opinion about popularity. Yes is the appropriate response here.

× I still see kids riding bike.

✓ I still see kids riding bikes.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so the plural form bikes is required. A singular countable noun would need an article, such as a bike.

× Even this bike we popularly call Okada is still very much popular.

✓ Even the bikes we popularly call Okadas are still very popular.

The definite article the is used because the sentence refers to a specific recognized group of bikes. The plural form is also needed because the statement refers to bikes generally. Very popular is the natural adjective phrase; very much popular is not idiomatic here.

× Even this bike we popularly call Okada is still very much popular.

✓ Even the bikes we popularly call Okadas are still very popular.

Very is used directly before the adjective popular. Very much is generally used with verbs or with certain comparative and participial expressions, so very popular is the appropriate form.

× It's quicker compared to cab, but I still see kids riding bikes OK.

✓ It's quicker than a cab, but I still see kids riding bikes.

Cab is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article: a cab. In comparisons, quicker than is the standard comparative structure. The final OK is unnecessary in this sentence.