Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I did and my dad taught me how to ride a bike when I was like 5 or 6 years old.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is direct, natural, and grammatically clear. To make it more effective, avoid the informal filler “like” and add one specific supporting detail, such as where you learned or how you felt. Use a smoother linker such as “I remember that…” to extend the answer naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My dad taught me how to ride when I was about five or six years old. I remember practicing in a quiet park near our home, and I was really proud when I finally managed to ride on my own.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Your main idea is clear, but there are several vocabulary and grammar problems. Use “they are” instead of “it is” because “bikes” is plural, and replace “nationwidely” with “nationwide.” “CTCBD” is unclear and should probably be “central business districts,” while “bag” should be “bike,” and “can hear us get access” should be “helps us get around.” Avoid repeating “in China,” and organize the reason with a clear linker such as “This is because.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. This is because many central business districts have narrow, crowded streets, so cycling is often more convenient than driving. In addition, bike-sharing services make it easy for people to travel short distances.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

The noun bikes is plural, so it should be referred to with they, not it. Use they are instead of it is. Suggestion: Always check whether the pronoun agrees with the noun in number.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Bikes is plural, so the verb must be are, not is. The correct form is they are very popular. Suggestion: Identify the subject first, then choose a singular or plural verb.

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Nationwidely is not the correct adverb. Nationwide can function as an adverb and means throughout the country. Suggestion: Use nationwide rather than adding -ly to the adjective national.

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Quite a lot must be followed by of before a plural countable noun. Therefore, say quite a lot of narrow streets. Suggestion: Use quite a lot of with plural countable nouns and uncountable nouns.

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, it is very popular in China nationwidely because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot narrow streets in China, so riding a bag can hear us get access to other places very conveniently.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in China nationwide because in the CTCBD there are quite a lot of narrow streets in China, so riding a bike can help us get access to other places very conveniently.

Can hear us get access is not an appropriate verb structure for this meaning. Use help us get access, in which help is followed by an object and the base form of the verb. Also, bike is the appropriate noun in this context, not bag. Suggestion: Use can help us + base verb to explain how something makes an activity easier.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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