Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, umm, to be honest, umm, uh, that is my sister's bicycle and after she uh, move another city for college, I use it.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Of course, there are many people, uh, taking bicycle to community in their lives.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答基本切题,但有较多停顿和重复,影响自然度。注意时态和句子结构:应将“move”改为过去式“moved”,并用“it was my sister’s bicycle”描述过去的情况。可以先直接回答,再补充自行车的来源和使用时间;使用“after”连接细节,使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. It was actually my sister’s bicycle, but after she moved to another city for college, I started using it. I rode it around my neighborhood quite often.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,但后半句表达不自然且意思不清。“taking bicycle to community”不是正确搭配,可以改为“riding bicycles in their daily lives”或“using bikes to commute”。建议说明自行车受欢迎的具体原因,例如环保、方便或适合短途出行,并使用“because”连接理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities, because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. Many people use them to commute to work or travel short distances.
× That is my sister's bicycle and after she move another city for college, I use it.
✓ That was my sister's bicycle, and after she moved to another city for college, I used it.
这个问题描述的是童年时期的经历,因此应使用一般过去时。"is" 应改为 "was","move" 应改为 "moved","use" 应改为 "used"。建议讲述过去发生的事情时,注意统一使用过去时态。
× After she moved another city for college
✓ After she moved to another city for college
动词 "move" 表示搬到某个地方时,地点前通常使用介词 "to",所以应说 "move to another city"。建议记住表示移动或前往某地时常用 "move to"、"go to" 和 "travel to"。
× There are many people taking bicycle to community in their lives.
✓ There are many people riding bicycles to commute in their daily lives.
"many people" 表示许多人,因此后面的可数名词应使用复数形式,"bicycle" 应改为 "bicycles"。同时,表示使用自行车时,"riding bicycles" 比 "taking bicycle" 更自然。建议注意数量词 "many" 后面要接可数名词复数。