Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời đi thẳng vào câu hỏi và có thêm hai chi tiết cụ thể: độ tuổi và cách bạn học đi xe đạp. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp “my parents support” thành “my parents’ support” hoặc tự nhiên hơn là “without any help from my parents”. Bạn cũng nên bỏ từ ngập ngừng “uh” để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Có thể thêm một kết quả hoặc cảm xúc để câu trả lời phong phú hơn, chẳng hạn như việc bạn cảm thấy tự tin hoặc thường đạp xe đi đâu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven years old. I learned to ride it by myself without any help from my parents. At first, it was quite difficult, but I gradually became more confident. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã cố gắng trả lời bằng cách so sánh mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp trong quá khứ, nhưng câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng và chưa hoàn chỉnh. Cụm “bribed student” không đúng ngữ cảnh; nên dùng “a primary school student” hoặc “a secondary school student”. Cần sửa “all of their students” thành “most students” và tránh lặp lại “to ride to work/to ride to school”. Hãy bắt đầu bằng ý chính rõ ràng, sau đó đưa ra lý do hoặc so sánh hiện tại với quá khứ bằng từ nối như “because”, “however” hoặc “although”.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes used to be very popular in my country, especially when I was in primary and secondary school. Most students rode bicycles to school because they were affordable and convenient. However, they are less common nowadays, as many young people use motorbikes or get rides from their parents.

× It used to be popular when I was bribed student and high school student.

✓ It used to be popular when I was a primary school student and a high school student.

The singular countable noun student requires an article. Use a before each singular noun phrase: a primary school student and a high school student. The word bribed does not fit this context; primary is the appropriate adjective if you mean a student in primary school.

× At that time all of their stud all of their students or bought a bike to ride to work to ride to school and

✓ At that time, all of the students bought bikes to ride to school.

The original sentence contains repeated and incomplete words, which makes its structure unclear. Use one complete subject, all of the students, followed by the past-tense verb bought. The phrase to ride to work is unrelated to the question and should be removed. End the sentence with a complete idea.