Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, when I was a child my parents bought for me because they want to ask me master a skill.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes I totally absolutely think bikes are popular in our city. I think bike bikes are eco friendly for city and saves energies.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答基本切题,但存在明显的语法和搭配问题。应使用正确的过去时:"my parents bought me a bike",而不是 "bought for me";"wanted me to master a skill" 比 "want to ask me master a skill" 更自然。建议先直接回答,再说明父母买车的原因,并补充一个具体细节,例如你在哪里骑车或骑车带来的好处。避免使用 "Yes, of course" 这类不必要的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me because they wanted me to learn an important practical skill. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed the sense of freedom it gave me.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,但有重复和语法错误。"totally absolutely" 语义重复,只保留一个即可;"bike bikes" 应改为 "bikes";主语是复数时应使用 "save energy",而不是 "saves energies"。另外,问题问的是国家,回答中却缩小为城市,建议先说明全国情况,再用原因和例子展开。可以使用 "because" 或 "for example" 连接细节,并提到自行车环保、方便或有助于缓解交通拥堵。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. They are an eco-friendly and affordable way to travel, and they can also help reduce traffic congestion. For example, many people ride bikes to work or use shared bicycles for short trips.
× Yes, of course, when I was a child my parents bought for me because they want to ask me master a skill.
✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, my parents bought a bike for me because they wanted me to master a skill.
句子描述的是童年时发生的事情,所以 want 应改为过去式 wanted,与 bought 和 was 保持时态一致。建议讲述过去经历时,统一使用一般过去时。
× Yes, of course, when I was a child my parents bought for me because they want to ask me master a skill.
✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, my parents bought a bike for me because they wanted me to master a skill.
buy 后面需要说明购买的对象,因此应加入 a bike。want/ask 后面的结构也不完整;表达“想让某人做某事”时,应使用 wanted me to master。建议注意动词后所需要的宾语和补语结构。
× I think bike bikes are eco friendly for city and saves energies.
✓ I think bikes are eco-friendly in the city and save energy.
bike bikes 是重复且错误的形式,这里应使用复数名词 bikes。energies 通常表示不同种类的能量;这里表示一般的“能源”,应使用不可数名词 energy。建议区分可数名词复数和不可数名词。
× I think bike bikes are eco friendly for city and saves energies.
✓ I think bikes are eco-friendly in the city and save energy.
表示“在城市里”应使用介词 in,而不是 for。建议根据地点、时间或对象的不同,选择合适的介词。
× I think bike bikes are eco friendly for city and saves energies.
✓ I think bikes are eco-friendly in the city and save energy.
city 是可数名词单数,前面需要限定词;这里指说话双方都知道的城市,所以使用定冠词 the,构成 the city。
× I think bike bikes are eco friendly for city and saves energies.
✓ I think bikes are eco-friendly in the city and save energy.
主语 bikes 是复数,因此谓语动词不能使用第三人称单数形式 saves,应改为 save。建议先确定主语是单数还是复数,再选择相应的动词形式。