Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, “my friends my old friends”처럼 반복이 있고 “hang in with”는 이 문맥에서 부자연스럽습니다. “hang out with my friends” 또는 “ride around with my friends”를 사용하세요. 또한 과거의 경험이므로 “I want”가 아니라 “I wanted”라고 해야 하며, 친구들과 자전거를 타고 놀았다는 구체적인 내용을 연결어와 함께 제시하면 더 효과적입니다. 예를 들어 “because” 뒤에 이유를 하나로 명확하게 정리하고, 마지막에 즐거웠던 결과를 덧붙이세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. Most of my friends had bikes, so I wanted to ride around with them after school. We often explored the neighborhood together, and it was a lot of fun.

Gợi ý: 국가와 도시 정보가 서로 모순되고 문장 구조가 불명확하여 질문에 대한 답변을 이해하기 어렵습니다. “Bicycles are not very popular in Korea”처럼 주제를 먼저 직접 답하고, “In my city”로 지역 상황을 설명해야 합니다. “road, bus or trains” 대신 “busy roads, buses, and trains”를 사용하고, 사람들이 자전거를 타는 모습을 자주 보지 못한다는 의미는 “I don’t often see people riding bikes”라고 표현하세요. “However”나 “because” 같은 연결어를 사용해 대중교통과 자전거 이용률의 관계를 논리적으로 연결하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in Korea, especially in my city. The roads are often busy, and most people use buses or trains to commute. As a result, I don’t often see people riding bikes, although cycling is becoming more popular for exercise.

× Yes I had a bike because my friends my old friends rode a bike and I want to hang in with my friends and it's so funny.

✓ Yes, I had a bike because my old friends rode bikes, and I wanted to hang out with them. It was so much fun.

The question asks about a childhood experience, so wanted should be used instead of want. The past form was should replace is because the speaker is describing a past experience. Hang out with is the correct expression for spending time with friends.

× Yes I had a bike because my friends my old friends rode a bike and I want to hang in with my friends and it's so funny.

✓ Yes, I had a bike because my old friends rode bikes, and I wanted to hang out with them. It was so much fun.

When referring to several friends riding bicycles, bikes is more appropriate than the singular form a bike. Use plural nouns when the meaning refers to more than one item.

× Yes I had a bike because my friends my old friends rode a bike and I want to hang in with my friends and it's so funny.

✓ Yes, I had a bike because my old friends rode bikes, and I wanted to hang out with them. It was so much fun.

The correct phrasal verb is hang out with, not hang in with. Hang out means to spend time relaxing with someone.

× Iceland bicycle is not popular in Korea.

✓ Bicycles are not popular in Korea.

The original sentence uses Iceland as the subject, but the intended subject is bicycles. Because bicycles is plural, use are rather than is.

× Iceland bicycle is not popular in Korea.

✓ Bicycles are not popular in Korea.

Bicycles is a general plural noun, so it should not be expressed as the singular phrase bicycle in this context.

× My city is Bhutan, but there are always road, bus or trains.

✓ My city is in Bhutan, but there are always roads, buses, or trains available.

There are is correctly used with plural nouns, but each item in the list must also be plural. Use roads and buses to match the plural structure. In addition, in Bhutan is the correct prepositional phrase for describing a city's location.

× My city is Bhutan, but there are always road, bus or trains.

✓ My city is in Bhutan, but there are always roads, buses, or trains available.

The list refers to multiple roads, buses, and trains, so the plural forms roads and buses are required. Trains is already correctly plural.

× so I say I can't I'm not looking the people's riding bike.

✓ Therefore, I do not often see people riding bikes.

The original sentence combines several incomplete clauses and does not form a clear sentence. Use one complete clause with the subject I, the adverb often, and the verb see. People riding bikes is the correct noun phrase for cyclists.

× so I say I can't I'm not looking the people's riding bike.

✓ Therefore, I do not often see people riding bikes.

See does not require the preposition at or a possessive form before people. The natural structure is see people riding bikes.

× so I say I can't I'm not looking the people's riding bike.

✓ Therefore, I do not often see people riding bikes.

People is already a plural noun, so the incorrect possessive form people's should not be used here. Bikes should also be plural because the statement refers to bicycles in general.