Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I guess so because there are loads of bikers on the street and the roads are always narrow in Japan anyway.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 質問には直接答えられていますが、回答が短すぎるため、具体的な情報を1〜2文追加するとよいです。例えば、何歳の頃に持っていたか、どこで乗っていたか、どのように感じていたかを説明しましょう。過去の習慣には「I used to ...」などを使うと、より自然で内容のある回答になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 意見と理由を述べており、回答の基本構成はできています。ただし、「bikers」はオートバイに乗る人を指すことがあるため、自転車について話す場合は「cyclists」や「people riding bicycles」の方が明確です。また、「anyway」はこの文脈ではやや不自然なので避け、「especially in crowded cities」のように具体的な説明を加えましょう。人気の理由として、通勤・通学や交通渋滞との関係を述べると、より説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Japan, especially in crowded cities. There are many cyclists on the streets because bicycles are convenient for short journeys and easier to park than cars. They are also useful for commuting and getting around narrow residential areas.

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