Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I do remember having a bike when I was a child. That was precisely when I was twelve to fifteen years old. I used to lock that bike and used to ride that bike after school with my friends and enjoy it whenever I had the time and privilege to.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think bike is one of the most popular way to commute in my country, especially for children. Back in my childhood, riding a bike used to be a luxury and I used to ride bikes with a lot of my friends and with my parents for vision as well.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: Answer the question more directly and use natural phrasing. “I do remember” is slightly unnecessary, and “precisely when I was twelve to fifteen years old” should be “when I was between twelve and fifteen.” Avoid repeating “that bike,” and replace the unnatural phrase “the time and privilege to” with “the time.” Also, locking the bike is not relevant unless you explain why. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was between twelve and fifteen. I usually rode it to school and around my neighborhood with my friends after class. It was a great way to spend time outdoors and get some exercise.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Correct the grammar and make the answer more logically consistent. Say “bikes are one of the most popular ways” rather than “bike is one of the most popular way.” “For vision” is unclear and should be replaced with a precise expression such as “for recreation” or “to enjoy the scenery.” The statement that cycling was a luxury does not clearly support the idea that bikes are popular, so explain whether they are mainly popular among children or commuters. Add a clear reason or example using a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. Many people use them for short journeys because they are inexpensive and environmentally friendly. For example, children often ride their bikes to school or around their neighborhoods with their friends.
Ngữ pháp
× I think bike is one of the most popular way to commute in my country, especially for children.
✓ I think a bike is one of the most popular ways to commute in my country, especially for children.
The expression one of the most popular must be followed by a plural noun, so way should be ways. Also, bike is a singular countable noun and requires an article in this context. Use one of the most popular + plural noun, such as one of the most popular ways.
× I think bike is one of the most popular way to commute in my country, especially for children.
✓ I think a bike is one of the most popular ways to commute in my country, especially for children.
The singular countable noun bike cannot normally be used without an article here. Use a bike when referring to a bike in general. Remember that singular countable nouns usually require a, an, the, or another determiner.
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