Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I can't afford it as a child. So I often borrowed my friend's bike and learned to Rajas away, but now I have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because I always see many people go cycling in the way and there are many matches about the bike.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,也提供了原因、经历和现在的情况,内容比较完整。但有几处明显的语法和用词问题:过去的经济状况应使用“couldn't afford one”,而不是“can't afford it”;“learned to Rajas away”应改为“learned to ride”或“learned how to ride”;另外,句子之间需要更自然的连接。建议控制在3—4句,并使用“because”和“as a result”等连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. Instead, I often borrowed my friend’s bike and gradually learned how to ride. I have my own bike now, and I still use it from time to time.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确,也给出了两个理由,但“bikes”是复数,后面应使用“they are”;“go cycling in the way”表达不自然,可以改为“cycle on the roads”或“go cycling around the city”;“matches about the bike”应改为“cycling races”或“cycling events”。建议增加一个具体结果或例子,例如说明自行车常用于通勤、锻炼或周末活动,并使用“also”连接两个理由。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling on the roads, especially in the early morning or at weekends. Cycling events are also held regularly, and many people use bikes for exercise or short journeys.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时态问题)

× No, I didn't When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I can't afford it as a child.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was a child, I didn't have a bike because I couldn't afford one.

“When I was a child”表示过去时间,因此“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”。另外,“one”用于代替前面提到的单数名词“bike”,表达更自然。回答过去经历时,要确保相关动词都使用过去时。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because I always see many people go cycling in the way and there are many matches about the bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because I always see many people cycling on the roads, and there are many cycling races.

这里谈论的是复数名词“bikes”,所以不能用单数代词“it”。应直接使用复数名词“bikes”,或者使用复数代词“they”。名词和代词的单复数必须保持一致。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because I always see many people go cycling in the way and there are many matches about the bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because I always see many people cycling on the roads, and there are many cycling races.

“in the way”通常表示“挡路”或“以某种方式”,不能表示“在道路上骑车”。表达“在道路上”应使用“on the roads”。建议记住:在道路、街道上通常使用介词“on”。

17: Incorrect use of the definite article(定冠词使用错误)

× Yes, I think it's very popular in my country because I always see many people go cycling in the way and there are many matches about the bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because I always see many people cycling on the roads, and there are many cycling races.

这里是泛指自行车,而不是某一辆特定的自行车,因此不能使用定冠词“the”。泛指一类事物时,可以使用复数名词“bikes”,通常不需要冠词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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