Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then add one or two specific details. Use “As far as I can remember” instead of “If I can remember,” and correct “pay” to “play.” Also, say “play with my neighbor” rather than “play all the time with my neighbor.” Avoid ending with “That’s it,” because it sounds abrupt; finish with a brief comment about how you felt about the bike.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about ten years old. As far as I can remember, it was red and white, and it had training wheels. I often rode it and played with my neighbor after school, so I have very fond memories of it.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and organize the reasons with a linking word such as “mainly.” Use “There are a lot of people,” not “There’s a lot of people.” Replace the repeated fillers “like” and the unclear phrase “when it’s not a bit far” with “when their destination is nearby.” Give specific examples, such as commuting to school, shopping, or exercising.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, mainly because they are convenient and inexpensive. Many people ride them to school, to work, or to nearby shops to buy groceries. They are also a popular way to exercise, especially in cities with dedicated bike lanes.

× If I can remember it was red and white.

✓ If I remember correctly, it was red and white.

The phrase 'If I can remember' is not the natural expression for introducing a memory. Use 'If I remember correctly' when you are uncertain about whether your memory is accurate.

× There's a lot of people who ride bikes for like going in on grocery shopping or go like going to school or when they're going to places like when it's not a bit far.

✓ There are a lot of people who ride bikes to go grocery shopping, go to school, or travel to places that are not too far away.

Use 'There are' before the plural noun phrase 'a lot of people.' The original sentence also contains an unnecessarily complicated structure. Use parallel phrases such as 'go grocery shopping,' 'go to school,' and 'travel to places' to make the sentence clearer.

× There's a lot of people who ride bikes for like going in on grocery shopping or go like going to school or when they're going to places like when it's not a bit far.

✓ There are a lot of people who ride bikes to go grocery shopping, go to school, or travel to places that are not too far away.

The subject 'a lot of people' is plural, so it must be followed by the plural verb 'are,' not 'is.' Remember to match the verb with the noun that follows 'there.'

× There's a lot of people who ride bikes for like going in on grocery shopping or go like going to school or when they're going to places like when it's not a bit far.

✓ There are a lot of people who ride bikes to go grocery shopping, go to school, or travel to places that are not too far away.

The expressions 'going in on grocery shopping' and 'going to places' are not used correctly in this context. Use 'go grocery shopping' and 'go to school.' The preposition 'to' correctly shows purpose or direction here.

× There's a lot of people who ride bikes for like going in on grocery shopping or go like going to school or when they're going to places like when it's not a bit far.

✓ There are a lot of people who ride bikes to go grocery shopping, go to school, or travel to places that are not too far away.

The original sentence contains repeated fillers such as 'like' and combines several ideas without a clear structure. Organize the examples with a parallel list: 'go grocery shopping, go to school, or travel to places that are not too far away.'