Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I used to have a bike while I was in middle school. It was only three kilometers from my school to my home, so I usually ride my bike to school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country with more and more people joining to work and school. They usually ride ride bikes to work because it's very convenient and quickly
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答直接并且有清晰的原因,内容也比较具体。注意时态一致:前文使用过去时“used to have”,后文应使用“rode”而不是“ride”。“while I was in middle school”可以改为更自然的“when I was in middle school”。此外,可以补充一个结果或感受,使答案更完整,但总长度不要超过5句话。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was in middle school. My school was only three kilometers from my home, so I usually rode there by bike. It was convenient and also helped me stay active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了明确观点,但有多处语法和用词问题。“joining to work and school”不自然,应改为“cycling to work and school”或“commuting by bike”。“ride ride”是重复错误;“quickly”是副词,应使用形容词“quick”。建议使用“because”连接原因,并补充一个具体例子,例如城市共享单车或短途通勤,以增强内容的具体性。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. More and more people cycle to work or school because it is convenient and affordable. In addition, bike-sharing services have made cycling even more common for short journeys.
× It was only three kilometers from my school to my home, so I usually ride my bike to school.
✓ It was only three kilometers from my school to my home, so I usually rode my bike to school.
整段内容是在描述学生时期的经历,使用了一般过去时“was”。因此,后面的动词也应该使用过去式。“ride”的过去式是“rode”。建议先判断事件发生的时间,再保持整句话的时态一致。
× They usually ride ride bikes to work because it's very convenient and quickly.
✓ They usually ride bikes to work because they are very convenient and quick.
“bikes”是复数名词,不能用单数代词“it”指代,应使用复数代词“they”。另外,删除了重复的“ride”。建议根据先行词的单复数选择代词:单数用“it”,复数用“they”。
× They usually ride ride bikes to work because it's very convenient and quickly.
✓ They usually ride bikes to work because they are very convenient and quick.
“convenient”和“quickly”由系动词“are”连接,应该使用形容词来描述自行车,而不能使用副词“quickly”。因此,“quickly”应改为形容词“quick”。建议在“be、seem、become”等系动词后使用形容词,而不是副词。