Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答切题，也提供了购买时间、骑车地点和同伴等细节，但有明显的重复和语法问题，例如“I have the I had...”“I was I was”“after after”以及“write”应改为“ride”。“a job sworn right”表达不清，建议直接说“my first bike”。另外，“for example”在这里使用不自然，可以用“Usually”或“On weekends”连接细节。建议按照“直接回答—具体背景—活动和感受”的顺序组织，并控制在3—4个流畅句子内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me my first bike when I was about eight years old. I used to ride it with my friends in the park after school, and we often cycled together on weekends. It was a lot of fun and gave me many happy childhood memories.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了“自行车很流行”的观点，并给出了价格低、使用方便等理由，但存在较多搭配和语法错误，例如“bike are”应为“bikes are”，“shell bags”应为“shared bikes”，“get a get around”应为“get around”，“write”应为“ride”，以及“write a subway station”表达不清。建议明确说明共享单车如何帮助上班族和学生前往地铁站，并使用“because”或“For example”连接原因和例子。开头“From my perspective, I think”略显重复，可以直接说“I think bikes are quite popular...”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, commuters and students often ride them to and from subway stations, which helps them avoid traffic jams.

× I have the I had a job sworn right by that my parents bought me when I was I was about 8 and I used to ride it with my friends in the park after after school for example.

✓ I had a bike that my parents bought for me when I was about eight, and I used to ride it with my friends in the park after school, for example.

这个问题描述的是童年时期的经历，因此应该使用过去时。原句中的“I have”是现在时，应改为“I had”。“when I was I was”和“after after”属于口语重复，应删除重复部分。建议讲述过去经历时，先明确使用过去时，并避免重复单词。

× From my perspective, I think bike are quite popular in my country, especially in a big city because many people use shell bags to get a get around and it's cheap and convenient.

✓ From my perspective, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in a big city, because many people use shell bags to get around, and they are cheap and convenient.

“bike”表示一辆自行车时用单数，但这里是在泛指自行车这一类交通工具，所以应使用复数“bikes”。相应地，后面的代词也应使用复数“they”，而不是单数“it”。建议表达一类事物时，通常使用复数名词。

× We often write each others on weekends and it was a lot of fun.

✓ We often rode with each other on weekends, and it was a lot of fun.

固定表达是“each other”，不能写成“each others”。“each other”表示“彼此”，用于两个人或多个人之间的相互关系。建议记住固定搭配“with each other”，例如“We studied with each other.”

× We often write each others on weekends and it was a lot of fun.

✓ We often rode with each other on weekends, and it was a lot of fun.

前文是在描述童年时的活动，属于过去的经历，所以“write”应改为过去式“rode”。这里“ride”的过去式是不规则变化“rode”，不能写成“rided”。建议熟记常见不规则动词的过去式，例如“ride—rode—ridden”。

× For instance, I often say some workers or students write a subway station.

✓ For instance, I often see some workers or students ride to a subway station.

表示骑车前往某个地点时，应使用“ride to + 地点”，所以需要介词“to”。原句中缺少表示方向的介词。建议表示“去某地”时使用“to”，例如“ride to school”和“walk to the station”。