Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答过去的经历时要使用过去时，因此应将“Yes, I do”改为“Yes, I did”。“mum bombard bike”表达不清，可能想说“mountain bike（山地车）”。可以补充购买原因或使用情况，使答案更完整、更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a mountain bike when I was ten years old. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Gợi ý: 答案有明确观点和原因，但存在搭配和语法问题：“easy to ride in”应改为“easy to ride”， “easy parking”应改为“easy to park”， “goes for school”应改为“goes to school”，而“taking a bike”更自然的表达是“by bike”。建议使用“because”和“For example”等连接词，并将原因分成清晰的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient, inexpensive, and easy to park. For example, many students ride their bikes to school every day.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题发生在过去，问题使用了过去时“Did you have...?”，所以回答也应使用过去时。将“do”改为“did”。

× I have a mum bombard bike when I was ten years old.

✓ I had a mountain bike when I was ten years old.

“when I was ten years old”表示过去的时间，因此动词“have”应改为过去式“had”。另外，“mum bombard bike”应为“mountain bike”，表示“山地自行车”。

× Yes, of course because it's very easy to ride in and easy parking and everyone goes for school mostly taking a bike.

✓ Yes, of course, because it is very easy to ride a bike, easy to park, and everyone goes to school by bike.

“ride in”不适合表达“骑自行车”，应说“ride a bike”。“goes for school”中的介词错误，应改为“goes to school”。表示交通方式时，可以使用“by bike”。

× Yes, of course because it's very easy to ride in and easy parking and everyone goes for school mostly taking a bike.

✓ Yes, of course, because it is very easy to ride a bike, easy to park, and everyone goes to school by bike.

原句把“easy to ride”“easy parking”和“taking a bike”直接连接在一起，结构不平行，句子不够完整自然。可以使用平行结构“easy to ride... and easy to park...”，并用“goes to school by bike”完整表达后半部分。

× Yes, of course because it's very easy to ride in and easy parking and everyone goes for school mostly taking a bike.

✓ Yes, of course, because it is very easy to ride a bike, easy to park, and everyone mostly takes a bike to school.

“everyone”虽然表示很多人，但语法上属于单数主语，因此后面的动词应使用第三人称单数形式。“take”应改为“takes”。