Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接，也提供了个人经历和观点，但“about 6 years older than I first learned”表达错误，应改为“when I was about six years old”或“I learned to ride when I was about six”。“transport vehicle”不自然，可以说“a convenient means of transport”。建议用连接词补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点、用途或感受，并避免重复使用“bike/bicycles”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about six years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. I still think bikes are a convenient way to get around narrow streets.

Gợi ý: 回答了问题并给出了共享单车和通勤两个理由，但语法和搭配问题较多。“full filled up the streets”应改为“fill the streets”或“are everywhere”；“remaining their habits”应改为“have maintained the habit”；“ride the bikes to their companies”应改为“ride bikes to work”。建议使用“because”或“for example”连接理由，并加入更具体的结果或场景。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Shared bikes are everywhere, and many people use them to commute to work because they are cheap and convenient. For example, commuters often cycle from a subway station to their offices.

× I was about 6 years older than I first learned to ride bicycles, and I still think bicycles are a great transport vehicle in small streets.

✓ I was about 6 years old when I first learned to ride bicycles, and I still think bicycles are a great transport vehicle in small streets.

“6 years older than”表示“比……大6岁”，后面不能直接接“I first learned”。这里想表达的是“我六岁时学会骑自行车”，所以应使用“6 years old when”。建议区分“be years old”（年龄）和“be years older than”（比较年龄）。

× I think bikes are still popular in my country as nowadays the shared bikes are still full filled up the streets and many people are remaining their habits to ride the bikes to their companies.

✓ I think bikes are still popular in my country because nowadays shared bikes still fill the streets, and many people maintain their habits of riding bikes to their companies.

“shared bikes are still full filled up the streets”错误地使用了被动结构。这里“共享单车”是主动“填满街道”的主语，应使用主动语态“shared bikes fill the streets”，不能使用“are filled up the streets”。

× I think bikes are still popular in my country as nowadays the shared bikes are still full filled up the streets and many people are remaining their habits to ride the bikes to their companies.

✓ I think bikes are still popular in my country because nowadays shared bikes still fill the streets, and many people maintain their habits of riding bikes to their companies.

句子描述的是现在的普遍情况和习惯，应该使用一般现在时。“are remaining”不适合表达“保持习惯”，应改为一般现在时“maintain”。描述长期事实或经常性行为时，优先使用一般现在时。

× I think bikes are still popular in my country as nowadays the shared bikes are still full filled up the streets and many people are remaining their habits to ride the bikes to their companies.

✓ I think bikes are still popular in my country because nowadays shared bikes still fill the streets, and many people maintain their habits of riding bikes to their companies.

“habit”后面通常使用“of + 动名词”，所以“habits to ride”应改为“habits of riding”。建议记忆固定搭配“have/maintain the habit of doing something”。