Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本无法理解，且没有直接清楚地回答问题。应先明确说明小时候是否有自行车，然后补充一个具体细节，例如是谁买的、在哪里骑以及骑自行车的感受。注意使用正确表达："When I was a child"，而不是 "This one was a child"；"ride a bike"，而不是 "write by"。避免重复使用语气词，并确保句子完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a small blue one when I was about six. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Gợi ý: 回答有一定观点，但句子结构混乱、结尾不完整，且没有清楚说明自行车在中国是否流行。应先直接回答，例如“在中国，自行车在不同地区的受欢迎程度不同”，再用连接词 because 或 however 解释。需要使用正确表达："China is such a big country"、"my hometown is Chongqing"、"Chongqing has many mountains"；如果想表达交通工具，应说 "use cars or buses"，而不是 "use a bag"。可以通过比较城市和山区来增加具体性。

Ví dụ: It depends on the area. Bikes are quite popular in many flat cities because they are cheap and convenient. However, cycling is less common in my hometown, Chongqing, because it has many mountains and steep roads.

× This one was a child.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

“This one was a child”不能表达“当我还是个孩子时”。表示时间时应使用“When I was a child”，并且要直接回答是否拥有自行车。

× I don't too nurture how to write by, but I do.

✓ I didn't really know how to ride a bike, but I did have one.

问题询问的是童年时期的情况，因此回答应使用过去时。将“don't”改为“didn't”，将“do”改为“did”。此外，“ride a bike”表示“骑自行车”，比“write by”正确。

× China is so big country

✓ China is such a big country

可数名词单数“country”前需要冠词“a”。在“such + a/an + 形容词 + 单数名词”结构中，应说“such a big country”，而不能说“so big country”。

× that has so many progress

✓ that has made so much progress

“progress”是不可数名词，不能用“many”修饰，应使用“much”。另外，“make progress”是固定搭配，因此应说“has made so much progress”。

× I think it depends on because you know

✓ I think it depends, because, you know, China is such a big country.

“depend on”后面通常需要接具体对象，例如“depend on the city”。原句中的“depends on”后没有宾语，因此这里直接使用“depends”更合适。

× my hometown mood in Chongqing

✓ My hometown is in Chongqing.

原句缺少谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。主语“My hometown”后需要使用系动词“is”。

× Chongqing were so many mountains.

✓ There are many mountains in Chongqing.

表示“某地有某物”时，应使用“There be”句型。因为“many mountains”是复数，所以使用“There are”，而不是“There were”。

× Chongqing were so many mountains.

✓ There are many mountains in Chongqing.

“mountains”是复数名词，因此谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。不过，这句话更重要的问题是缺少正确的“There be”结构。

× we usually use a bag as a.

✓ We usually use bikes as a means of transportation.

“a”后面必须接一个单数可数名词，原句中的“as a”没有完整的名词。表达交通工具的用途时，可以说“use bikes as a means of transportation”。