Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
When I was a child, I have a simple bike and I often buy bike to go outside with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In my childhood, bikes are popular. Every family will have a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案基本回答了问题,但存在明显的时态、冠词和动词搭配问题。“When I was a child”表示过去,因此应使用“had”和“bought”,而不是“have”和“buy”。此外,应说“a bike”,并用“ride my bike”表示“骑自行车”,而不是“buy bike”。建议先直接回答,再补充和朋友一起骑车的具体活动,使内容更自然、更有效。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a simple bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially at weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 答案提到了自行车很受欢迎,但没有充分回应现在“在你的国家是否流行”这一问题。“In my childhood”只表示过去,建议先用现在时直接回答“Yes, bikes are still very popular in my country”。描述过去时应使用“were”,而不是“are”;“Every family will have a bike”不自然且过于绝对,可改为“Most families had at least one bike”。建议加入具体原因,例如自行车价格低、方便通勤或有助于锻炼,并使用“because”连接。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. When I was a child, most families had at least one bike, and many people used them to go to school or work.
× When I was a child, I have a simple bike and I often buy bike to go outside with my friends.
✓ When I was a child, I had a simple bike and I often bought a bike to go outside with my friends.
“When I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此后面的动词应使用一般过去时。“have”应改为“had”,“buy”应改为“bought”。建议看到“When I was...”等明确的过去时间标志时,统一检查句中的动词是否使用过去式。
× When I was a child, I have a simple bike and I often buy bike to go outside with my friends.
✓ When I was a child, I had a simple bike and I often bought a bike to go outside with my friends.
“bike”是可数名词单数,前面通常需要限定词。“buy bike”应改为“bought a bike”。这里使用“a”表示一辆自行车。建议特别注意可数名词单数前是否需要使用“a/an/the”或其他限定词。
× In my childhood, bikes are popular. Every family will have a bike.
✓ In my childhood, bikes were popular. Every family had a bike.
“In my childhood”表示过去的时期,所以“are”应改为“were”。第二句描述童年时期的情况,“will have”表示将来,不符合上下文,应改为过去式“had”。建议根据时间状语选择时态:过去用一般过去时,现在用一般现在时,将来才使用“will”。