Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời đã trả lời trực tiếp và có thêm thông tin về chiếc xe cũng như người mua xe. Tuy nhiên, một số cụm từ chưa tự nhiên hoặc khó hiểu: “Yellow Mike” nên sửa thành “a yellow bike”, còn “foreign cycles” có thể là “four wheels” hoặc “training wheels”. Ngoài ra, cần sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý rõ hơn, chẳng hạn dùng “My father bought it for me, so…”. Hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn sử dụng chiếc xe để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: Definitely, yes. I had a yellow bike when I was a child, and my father bought it for me. It had training wheels at first, which helped me learn how to ride safely. I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời tự nhiên về mức độ phổ biến của xe đạp; “Not really good” nên đổi thành “Not really” hoặc “They are not very popular”. Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp: “the government don't” thành “the government doesn't”, “facility” thành “facilities”, và tránh lặp từ “improve”. Hãy nêu rõ nguyên nhân bằng cấu trúc mạch lạc, ví dụ: “This is mainly because…”. Bạn cũng nên đề cập đến tình trạng giao thông hoặc thiếu làn đường dành cho xe đạp để ý kiến cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: Bikes are not very popular in Vietnam, especially in big cities. This is mainly because there are not enough dedicated cycle paths, and the roads are often crowded with motorbikes and cars. However, cycling is becoming more popular among young people and fitness enthusiasts.

× I really love it.

✓ I really loved it.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use loved instead of love when describing a feeling or opinion in the past.

× and I, my father bought it for me.

✓ and my father bought it for me.

The phrase I, my father creates an incorrect sentence structure. Use my father as the subject of bought, and remove the unnecessary pronoun I.

× in Vietnam the government don't improve too much

✓ In Vietnam, the government doesn't improve things very much.

Government is a singular third-person subject, so use does not or doesn't, not do not or don't. The comma after Vietnam also helps separate the introductory place phrase.

× improve facility

✓ improve the facilities

The sentence refers to cycle-path infrastructure in general, so the plural form facilities is more appropriate. The definite article the is also needed because the facilities are specific facilities in Vietnam.

× or improve facility to to for the cycle paths especially.

✓ especially by improving facilities for cycle paths.

The sequence to to for is grammatically incorrect and makes the sentence difficult to understand. Use the phrase by improving facilities for cycle paths to express the method clearly.