Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, it's very popular in China and these days people don't have own a bag but use a shared bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,但时态错误:谈论童年经历应使用过去时“did”或“had”,不能用现在完成时“have”。此外,答案只有三个词,缺少具体信息。建议先明确回答“有/没有”,再补充自行车的用途、使用地点或频率,使答案达到2—3句并更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了明确观点,但有几处语法和用词问题:“bikes”是复数,应使用“they are very popular”;“people don't have own a bag”表达不清,可能想说“人们不一定要拥有自己的自行车”;“use a shared bike”前应加复数或冠词。建议使用“because”或“especially”连接原因,并加入具体例子,例如共享单车在城市通勤中的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes for short journeys because they are convenient and usually cheaper than taking a taxi.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
问题是时态不一致。问句使用一般过去时“Did you have...”,回答也应使用过去时助动词“did”,不能使用现在完成时形式“have”。建议:回答一般过去时的一般疑问句时,使用“did/didn’t”。
× Yeah, it's very popular in China and these days people don't have own a bag but use a shared bike.
✓ Yeah, they’re very popular in China, and these days people don’t have their own bikes but use shared bikes.
“Bikes”是复数名词,因此不能用单数代词“it”,应使用复数代词“they”。另外,“own”前面需要物主限定词“their”,所以应说“their own bikes”,表示“他们自己的自行车”。建议:代词要与所指名词在单复数上保持一致;表达“某人自己的……”时,使用“my/your/his/her/our/their own + 名词”。
× Yeah, it's very popular in China and these days people don't have own a bag but use a shared bike.
✓ Yeah, they’re very popular in China, and these days people don’t have their own bikes but use shared bikes.
这里讨论的是自行车这一类事物,而不是一辆特定的自行车,因此应使用复数“bikes”和“shared bikes”。同时,前后名词应保持数量一致。建议:谈论一类事物时通常使用复数名词,例如“Bikes are popular”和“people use shared bikes”。