Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question more directly by clearly stating that you do not remember having a bike. Your response includes relevant details, but some sentences are grammatically inaccurate: use “spent” instead of “spend,” “could play” instead of “can play,” and “were” instead of “was” after “what I remember.” Avoid repeating “I know and I remember,” and finish the final sentence clearly; “prayed” should probably be “played.” Use a linking word such as “instead” to connect your indoor activities to the absence of a bike.

Ví dụ: I don’t remember having a bike when I was a child. I spent most of my time indoors instead because my mother worked for Little Tikes and brought home lots of toys. My brother and I often played with them together, especially a small tea set that I really enjoyed.

Gợi ý: You give a clear opinion and explain that bicycles became more popular during the pandemic, which is relevant and specific. Improve the grammar and sentence structure by saying “not only among children but also among adults,” “the number of cyclists started to rise,” and “people couldn’t do many other activities.” The phrase “a sort of aceport” is unclear; use “a form of exercise and a pastime” instead. Add a clear linking phrase, such as “This was especially true during the pandemic,” and avoid combining too many ideas in one long sentence.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are popular among both children and adults in my country. You can see many people riding them in parks and on city streets. This became especially noticeable during the pandemic, when people wanted a safe form of exercise and a way to spend their free time outdoors.

× I spend most of my time indoors because my mom used to work for Little Tikes and she brought us a lot of toys.

✓ I spent most of my time indoors because my mom used to work for Little Tikes and she brought us a lot of toys.

The question asks about your childhood, so the main description should use the past tense. Change spend to spent to match the past-time context.

× She brought us a lot of toys that we can play together with my brother.

✓ She brought us a lot of toys that we could play with together with my brother.

Because the sentence describes a past situation, can should change to could. The phrase play with is also the natural verb pattern when referring to toys.

× I remember having a teacup set that I prayed.

✓ I remember having a teacup set that I played with.

The verb play requires the preposition with when you say that you used a toy. Prayed is a different verb and does not fit the meaning here.

× You see a lot of riders outside especially it started to spike up during the pandemic because a lot of people can't go outdoors, but they found bicycles, a sort of sport and a pastime.

✓ You see a lot of riders outside, especially because cycling started to become more popular during the pandemic, when many people couldn't go outdoors, but they found bicycles as a sort of sport and pastime.

The original sentence incorrectly joins especially directly to a complete clause. Use because to introduce the reason and when to connect the pandemic period. Since the sentence refers to the past pandemic period, can't should be changed to couldn't.

× A lot of people can't go outdoors.

✓ A lot of people couldn't go outdoors.

This sentence refers to the past situation during the pandemic, so the past form couldn't is required instead of the present form can't.