Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child? No, I didn't have any bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Some of my friends have it but I don't have it and I and I didn't have any in my life because my parents never let me have one.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly without repeating it. Use the natural phrase “I didn’t have a bike” instead of “I didn’t have any bike.” To develop the answer, add one specific reason or brief supporting detail, such as your parents’ decision or how you travelled as a child.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe, so they never bought me one. I usually walked or took the bus instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion about bike popularity at the beginning, rather than focusing mainly on your personal experience. Use the plural noun “bikes” and avoid repetition and unclear phrases such as “have it” and “in my life.” Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, using a linking word such as “because” or “however.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and university students. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys. However, I personally have never owned one because my parents thought cycling was unsafe.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× No, I didn't have any bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs a determiner. Use a before bike when referring to one nonspecific bike. Alternatively, you could say, No, I didn't have any bikes, using the plural form after any.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Some of my friends have it but I don't have it and I and I didn't have any in my life because my parents never let me have one.

✓ Some of my friends have bikes, but I don't have one because my parents never let me have one.

The pronoun it is inappropriate because bikes are plural in the first clause and because one is the correct pronoun for one nonspecific bike in the second clause. Also, I and I is an unnecessary repetition. Use one to refer back to a singular countable noun such as bike.

6: Present tense issue

× Some of my friends have it but I don't have it and I and I didn't have any in my life because my parents never let me have one.

✓ Some of my friends have bikes, but I don't have one, and I have never had one in my life because my parents never let me have one.

The phrase in my life refers to a period that continues up to the present, so the present perfect have never had is more appropriate than the simple past didn't have. Use the present perfect for experiences or situations that have continued or remained true until now.

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