Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, which you did well, and add a clear reason or contrast. However, use the correct expression “afraid of falling,” not “afraid of folding.” Also, “I was fond of playing football” is grammatically correct, but “I preferred playing football” sounds more natural in this context. Keep the answer concise and use a linking word such as “however” to connect the contrasting ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bicycle when I was little and tried to teach me how to ride it. However, I was afraid of falling, and I preferred playing football, so I did not ride it very often.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a clear opinion and relevant examples, but several phrases are unnatural or grammatically incorrect. Say “I have seen many people using bicycles to commute short distances,” rather than “seen so much of people using the commute a small distance.” Replace “spend especially the kids all up to ride bicycles” with “parents often encourage their children to ride bicycles.” Use “For example,” instead of “As example,” and avoid the repetitive ending “in the parks, at the town, everywhere.” Organize the answer with a topic sentence, one reason, and one specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys and leisure activities. Many people use them to commute short distances, and parents often encourage their children to ride. For example, I frequently see families cycling together in parks in the evening.

× Yes, I did. My father gave me a bicycle when I was little and he tried to teach me how to ride it, but unfortunately I did not like it very much because I'm afraid of folding and I was fond of playing football.

✓ Yes, I did. My father gave me a bicycle when I was little, and he tried to teach me how to ride it. Unfortunately, I did not like it very much because I was afraid of falling, and I was fond of playing football.

The question asks about a past experience, so the explanation should remain in the past tense. Change I'm afraid to I was afraid. Also, after afraid of, use a gerund (-ing form): falling. Falling is the appropriate verb for the meaning, whereas folding does not fit this context.

× I have seen so much of people using the commute a small distance and spend especially the kids all up to ride bicycles.

✓ I have seen many people using bicycles to commute short distances, especially children, and encouraging them to ride bicycles.

People are countable, so use many people rather than so much of people. Much is normally used with uncountable nouns. The expression using the commute is also grammatically incorrect; use using bicycles to commute. Because people is plural, the phrase should refer to short distances rather than a small distance. Keep the verb forms parallel: using and encouraging.

× As example, I have often seen parents riding bicycles with the kids in the evening, in the parks, at the town, everywhere.

✓ For example, I have often seen parents riding bicycles with their children in the evening, in parks, in town, or elsewhere.

Use the fixed expression For example, not As example. The phrase at the town is incorrect; the natural expression is in town. The article the is unnecessary before the general plural noun parks, so use in parks. Use their children instead of the kids when referring back to the parents' children.