Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was four years old, my father bought a bicycle and taught me how to ride it in a park near our home. Learning to ride made me feel thrilled and proud because I could keep up with my older cousins and explore the neighborhood.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think so. In my country cars are more common than bags because people need to commute long distance to work and find driving by themselves are more convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 92.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,先直接回答问题,再补充了时间、人物、地点和感受,细节具体,衔接自然。词汇如“keep up with”和“explore the neighborhood”使用准确。可以将“Learning to ride made me feel thrilled and proud”改得更口语化,例如使用“我感到很兴奋和自豪”,并注意“when I was four years old”与过去时搭配已经正确。整体上不需要增加更多内容,以避免超出Part 1答案的合适长度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was four, my father bought me a bike and taught me how to ride it in a park near our home. I felt really excited and proud because I could keep up with my older cousins and explore the neighborhood with them.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点,但存在明显的词汇和语法问题。首先,“bags”应改为“bikes”;其次,“commute long distance”应改为“commute long distances”或“travel long distances to work”;“find driving by themselves are more convenient”应改为“find it more convenient to drive themselves”。建议使用“because”引出原因,并补充一个具体背景,例如城市距离较远、公共交通不够方便或天气炎热。这样可以让观点更有说服力,同时保持答案简洁。
Ví dụ: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Cars are more common because many people have to travel long distances to work, and they find it more convenient to drive themselves. In addition, public transportation is not always convenient, especially in smaller cities.
× In my country cars are more common than bags because people need to commute long distance to work and find driving by themselves are more convenient.
✓ In my country cars are more common than bags because people need to commute long distances to work and find driving by themselves are more convenient.
“commute”表示通勤时,通常用复数“long distances”表示不同人通勤的距离。建议注意固定搭配:commute long distances to work。
× In my country cars are more common than bags because people need to commute long distance to work and find driving by themselves are more convenient.
✓ In my country cars are more common than bags because people need to commute long distance to work and find that driving by themselves is more convenient.
“driving by themselves”是动名词短语,整体作主语,因此谓语动词要用单数“is”,不能用“are”。另外,在“find”后加“that”可以使句子结构更清晰。