Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, it's man told my family is poor so.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, because the morning to
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答直接表达了“No”,但后半句语法和表达不清楚。“it's man”应改为明确的主语和动词,例如“my parents told me”。建议使用“直接回答 + 原因”的结构,并说明因为家庭经济状况不好,所以没有自行车。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. My family wasn’t very well-off when I was young, so my parents couldn’t afford to buy me a bike.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答只表达了观点“Yeah”,但原因没有说完整,句子也缺少谓语和具体信息。建议使用“观点 + 原因 + 具体场景”的结构,例如说明人们在早上骑自行车上班或锻炼,并使用完整句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people ride them to work in the morning. They are also convenient and environmentally friendly, especially in crowded cities.
× No, it's man told my family is poor so.
✓ No, my family was poor, so I didn't have a bike.
问题发生在过去的童年时期,因此应使用过去时。这里用“was”而不是“is”,用“didn't have”表示“没有自行车”。同时,原句的句子结构不完整且意思不清,改为“my family was poor, so I didn't have a bike”后,因果关系更加明确。
× No, it's man told my family is poor so.
✓ No, a man told me that my family was poor, so I didn't have a bike.
可数名词“man”前需要使用冠词“a”,不能说“it's man”。另外,“told”后面需要宾语,应说“told me”。不过,根据问题的语境,更自然的回答是“My family was poor, so I didn't have a bike.”学习时要注意:单数可数名词通常不能单独使用。
× No, it's man told my family is poor so.
✓ No, my family was poor, so I didn't have a bike.
原句的主语、谓语和从句连接混乱,句末的“so”也没有完整的结果分句。可以使用“because”或“so”表达原因和结果,例如:“My family was poor, so I didn't have a bike.”一个完整句子通常需要清楚的主语和谓语,并且连接词后要有完整的分句。
× Yeah, because the morning to
✓ Yeah, because people ride bikes in the morning.
原句只有时间短语“the morning”和介词“to”,缺少完整的主语和谓语,因此不能构成完整句子。应补充主语“people”和谓语“ride”,并使用正确的时间表达“in the morning”。回答问题时,要确保because后面接一个完整的句子。
× Yeah, because the morning to
✓ Yeah, because people ride bikes in the morning.
表示“在早上”时,应使用介词“in”,即“in the morning”,不能使用“to the morning”。此外,原句中“the morning to”的搭配不正确,应该改为完整表达“people ride bikes in the morning”。