Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and use the correct past tense. The sentence is contradictory: “No” conflicts with saying that your father bought you a bicycle. Also, “in my childhood” is unnatural here; say “when I was a child.” A clear answer with one supporting detail would be more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Gợi ý: You give a clear opinion and relevant reasons, but the answer is difficult to follow because several ideas are joined without punctuation or linking words. Use a topic sentence followed by two or three logically connected details, such as “For example” and “Moreover.” Correct “especially for short trips and exercise students” by separating the ideas, and complete the unfinished final sentence. Keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and exercise. Students and delivery workers often use them because they are cheap and convenient. Moreover, more people are cycling because it is a healthy form of exercise. For example, I sometimes ride my bike to the park at weekends.

× No, I don't have a bike because I have a bicycle my father bought for me in my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I had a bicycle my father bought for me in my childhood.

The question asks about the past, so the answer should also use the past tense. Change don't have to didn't have and have to had. The phrase my father bought is already correctly written in the past tense.

× Personally bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and exercise students and delivery workers often use them because they are cheap and convenient and more people are cycling now because it's healthy.

✓ Personally, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips and exercise. Students and delivery workers often use them because they are cheap and convenient, and more people are cycling now because it's healthy.

The original sentence contains several independent ideas joined together without appropriate sentence boundaries. Separate the ideas after exercise to avoid a run-on sentence. The comma after Personally also helps separate the introductory adverb from the main clause.