Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변의 구조가 명확하고, 아버지와 함께 연습했다는 구체적인 경험도 잘 제시했습니다. 다만 “for a work”는 부자연스러우므로 “to get to work” 또는 “for work”로 수정해야 합니다. 질문은 어린 시절의 경험에 관한 것이므로 마지막 문장은 현재의 자전거 이용과 어린 시절의 경험을 자연스럽게 연결하세요. “when I was young”과 “when I was a child” 중 하나만 사용하면 더 간결합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it in the park near our house, and I practiced almost every weekend. I still ride a bike these days, mainly to get to work and stay healthy.

Gợi ý: 질문에 직접 답하고 이유를 제시하려고 했지만, “go back park”는 “go back to the park” 또는 “go to the park”로 고쳐야 합니다. “on the weekend weekends”처럼 같은 표현을 반복하지 말고 “at weekends” 또는 “on weekends” 중 하나만 사용하세요. 또한 “people either bike”보다는 “people either ride bikes as a hobby or use them for exercise”가 더 자연스럽습니다. 사람들이 자전거를 타는 장소와 목적을 연결어로 명확하게 설명하면 답변의 내용과 응집력이 향상됩니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. When I go to the park near my home on weekends, I often see people riding bikes either as a hobby or for exercise. Many families also cycle together because it is an enjoyable and affordable activity.

× These days I often still ride a bike for a work.

✓ These days, I often still ride a bike for work.

Work is an uncountable noun when it refers to one's job or professional activity, so it does not take the article a. Use for work, not for a work.

× When I go back park near my home on the weekend weekends I can see that people either bike as a hobby or just as exercise.

✓ When I go back to the park near my home on weekends, I can see that people either bike as a hobby or just for exercise.

The verb phrase go back requires the preposition to before a destination. Use go back to the park. Also, for exercise is the natural prepositional phrase for expressing purpose.

× When I go back park near my home on the weekend weekends I can see that people either bike as a hobby or just as exercise.

✓ When I go back to the park near my home on weekends, I can see that people either bike as a hobby or just for exercise.

Park is a singular countable noun referring to a specific park near the speaker's home, so it needs the definite article the: the park.

× When I go back park near my home on the weekend weekends I can see that people either bike as a hobby or just as exercise.

✓ When I go back to the park near my home on weekends, I can see that people either bike as a hobby or just for exercise.

The phrase on the weekend weekends incorrectly combines singular and plural forms. Use on weekends for a repeated activity, or on the weekend for one particular weekend. Because the sentence describes a regular habit, on weekends is appropriate.