Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Luyện tậpPart12026-10-09 04:18:36

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, there are many bikes and cars as well.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 5.0

Gợi ý: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear yes/no statement, then add one or two specific details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed cycling with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives a clear opinion, but the second clause is not well connected and does not clearly support your idea. Use a linking word such as “although” or “because,” and provide a specific reason or example. Also, avoid the comma splice by separating the ideas into two sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. They are convenient and inexpensive, although many people still use cars for longer journeys.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, there are many bikes and cars as well.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and there are many bikes and cars as well.

The original sentence contains two independent clauses joined only by a comma, which creates a comma splice. Use a coordinating conjunction such as and, or separate the clauses with a full stop or semicolon. The corrected sentence also keeps the present tense because it describes a current situation.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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