Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child, but I am not nean on biking, so I never really use it. Maybe I biked on it for once or twice but I really like it though.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, they are, but not as much as public transportation and private cars are. So I think we don't have a biking culture.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly, then give a brief explanation. Correct the grammar and word choice: say “I wasn’t keen on biking,” “I never really used it,” and “I only rode it once or twice.” Avoid the contradictory ending “but I really like it”; explain whether you liked the bike or disliked cycling. Use a linking word such as “although” to connect contrasting ideas naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. However, I wasn’t very keen on cycling, so I hardly ever used it. I probably rode it only once or twice, although I really liked the bike itself.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is direct and includes a comparison, but improve the grammar and precision. Say “Bikes are popular, but not as popular as public transportation or private cars,” rather than “as ... are.” Replace the broad statement “we don’t have a biking culture” with a more specific explanation, such as traffic conditions, limited bike lanes, or people’s preference for convenience. Use a linking phrase like “This is mainly because” to make the reason clearer.

Ví dụ: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, but they are not as widely used as public transportation or private cars. This is mainly because many cities have heavy traffic and limited bike lanes. As a result, most people choose buses, trains, or cars for their daily commute.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I am not nean on biking.

✓ I am not keen on biking.

Nean is not the correct adjective in this sentence. The adjective keen means interested in or enthusiastic about something, and it is followed by on plus a gerund: keen on biking.

5: Past tense issue

× I never really use it.

✓ I never really used it.

The question asks about a past experience, and the student is describing a bike they had as a child. Therefore, the past-tense form used is needed instead of the present-tense form use.

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Maybe I biked on it for once or twice.

✓ Maybe I biked on it once or twice.

Once or twice already expresses frequency, so the preposition for is unnecessary. Use biked on it once or twice.

5: Past tense issue

× But I really like it though.

✓ But I really liked it, though.

The student is talking about their experience with the bike in the past, so liked is more consistent than the present-tense form like. Also, though should be separated with a comma when it is used at the end of the sentence.

25: Comparative and superlative errors

× Yes, they are, but not as much as public transportation and private cars are.

✓ Yes, they are, but they are not as popular as public transportation and private cars.

When comparing how popular two things are, use the comparative structure not as popular as, not not as much as. The adjective popular should be repeated to make the comparison grammatically clear.

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