Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike but the seat was too high so I didn't use it very often.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do, uh, a lot of people including me, uh, ride bikes every day instead of, uh, taking a car because sometimes bikes are more convenient. For example, I'm uh, I'm an undergraduate, so uh, to go.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,能够清楚回答问题,并提供了具体原因,内容自然有效。建议在转折前后使用逗号或连接词使句子更流畅,例如使用“however”或“because”。还可以补充一个简短的结果或细节,例如这辆自行车后来是否被闲置。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, the seat was too high for me, so I didn’t ride it very often. It mostly stayed in the garage until I grew taller.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答的观点很明确,也提到了原因和个人例子,但出现多次“uh”,影响流利度和自然度。最后一句没有完成,导致答案不完整;应明确说明学生骑车去哪里,例如去学校或图书馆。建议按照“观点—原因—具体例子”的结构组织答案,并避免重复表达“sometimes bikes are more convenient”,可以改为“they are convenient for short trips and help me avoid traffic”。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people, including me, ride them every day instead of taking a car because they are convenient for short trips and help us avoid traffic. As an undergraduate, I often cycle to campus and nearby shops.

Ngữ pháp

23:Sentence without a verb(无动词句)

× For example, I'm uh, I'm an undergraduate, so uh, to go.

✓ For example, I'm an undergraduate, so I ride my bike to go to school.

“so”后面的“to go”只是动词不定式,不能单独构成完整句子,缺少主语和谓语。应补充主语“I”和谓语“ride”,使句子结构完整。口语中的“uh”和重复的“I’m”属于表达犹豫或自我修正,不是语法错误;在正式回答中可以删去。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

High— Tall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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