Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I don't have

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think it's popular in our country because our country calls on the people to have a green travel.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,但时态和句子不完整。因为问题询问过去的经历,应使用一般过去时“didn’t have”,并在句末补充名词“a bike”。为了让回答更自然,可以增加一个简短原因,例如家庭没有买自行车,控制在两句话以内。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe to ride on busy roads.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答有明确观点和原因,结构基本清晰,但存在代词、搭配和表达不自然的问题。“bikes”是复数,应使用“they are popular”,而不是“it’s popular”;“calls on the people to have a green travel”应改为“encourages people to use green transportation”或“promotes greener travel”。还可以补充一个具体现象,例如越来越多人骑车上班或城市建设了自行车道。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because the government encourages people to use greener forms of transportation. In many cities, more people cycle to work, and there are also public bike-sharing schemes.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue(过去时态错误)

× No, I don't have

✓ No, I didn't have one.

问题中的问题使用了过去时态“Did you have...”,所以回答也应使用过去时。应将“don't have”改为“didn't have”。补充“one”可以明确指代一辆自行车,使句子更完整。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× Yes, I think it's popular in our country because our country calls on the people to have a green travel.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular in our country because our country encourages people to use bicycles for green travel.

“bikes”是复数名词,不能用单数代词“it”指代,应改为复数代词“they”,并使用“are popular”。回答时要注意代词的单复数必须与所指名词保持一致。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× Yes, I think it's popular in our country because our country calls on the people to have a green travel.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular in our country because our country encourages people to use bicycles for green travel.

“green travel”表示“绿色出行”这一抽象概念,通常作为不可数表达使用,不应在前面加不定冠词“a”。此外,泛指“人们”时通常说“people”,不需要使用“the”。建议区分特指和泛指:特定的人使用“the people”,泛指人们则直接使用“people”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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