Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Use consistent past tense because you are talking about your childhood: say “didn’t have,” “had,” “went,” and “got.” The phrase “base cycle” is unclear; use “a basic bicycle” or “an ordinary bicycle.” Also, “my first activity” does not fit this context, so say “my first proper bike.” Give a direct answer first, then add one or two specific details about how you used the bicycle and how you felt about getting your first bike. Avoid repeating “when” and keep the response to three or four clear sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a proper bike when I was a child. I had a basic bicycle, which I used to go to school and my tuition classes. When I reached the eleventh grade, I got my first proper bike, and I was really excited because it gave me more freedom to travel around my neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Replace informal or unclear expressions like “it’s very trending,” “everyone flexing,” and “like we hear” with natural phrases such as “they are fashionable” and “people like showing off their bikes.” Use linking words to organize your explanation, and add a specific reason or example, such as commuting, affordability, or the popularity of Royal Enfield Bullet motorcycles. Avoid repeating “like” and “bike.”

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people. They are a convenient and affordable way to travel, particularly in busy cities. In addition, many people enjoy owning fashionable motorcycles, such as Royal Enfield Bullets, because they like showing their style and status.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question refers to a past period, so the verb should be in the simple past. Use did not have, or didn't have, instead of don't have.

× I was having a base cycle on which I went to the school and my tuition.

✓ I had a bicycle on which I went to the school and my tuition.

The verb have should be in the simple past because you are describing possession in the past. Was having is not the appropriate form here because possession is normally expressed with had.

× I went to the school.

✓ I went to school.

When school is used to describe its usual purpose, such as studying, it normally does not take the definite article the. Use go to school rather than go to the school.

× When I grow up and when I reach in the eleventh standard, then I get my first activity and it is so good.

✓ When I grew up and reached the eleventh standard, I got my first activity, and it was so good.

The answer describes events that happened in the past, so grow, reach, get, and is should be changed to the simple past: grew, reached, got, and was.

× When I reach in the eleventh standard.

✓ When I reached the eleventh standard.

The verb reach is used directly with its destination or level and does not require in. Say reached the eleventh standard, not reached in the eleventh standard.

× I think yes bikes are popular in my country it's like a trend when you have your bullet or a bike it's very trending like everyone flexing their vehicle, like we hear, like that.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country. It is a trend: when people have a Bullet or a bike, they like to show off their vehicle.

Several independent ideas are joined without suitable punctuation or connecting words. Separate the main ideas into complete sentences and use a clear connector such as when.

× It is very trending.

✓ It is very trendy.

Trendy is the adjective used to describe something fashionable or popular. Trending is generally used for something that is currently becoming popular, especially a topic or piece of online content.

× Like everyone flexing their vehicle.

✓ It is like everyone is showing off their vehicle.

The original phrase lacks a finite verb after everyone. Use is showing, where is is the auxiliary verb and showing is the present participle.