Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child. It's color red and I really love to use it.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, bikes are popular in our country because it's means of transportation, especially for kids who's going to school. So yeah, popular.

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Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Answer the question in the past tense: use “had” instead of “do have.” Correct the phrase “It’s color red” to “It was red” or “It was red in color.” You could also add a specific detail about how or where you used the bike to make your answer more developed and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. I usually used it to visit my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Use the plural form and correct the grammar: say “they are a means of transportation” rather than “it’s means of transportation,” and “children who go to school” rather than “kids who’s going to school.” Avoid repeating “popular” at the end. Give a clear reason and one specific example, and use a linking word such as “especially” or “for example” to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient means of transportation. They are especially common among children who ride them to school. For example, many students use bikes because they can avoid traffic and stay active.

Ngữ pháp

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the main verb should be in the simple past tense. Use had, not do have, because the student no longer refers to the present.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× It's color red and I really love to use it.

✓ Its color is red, and I really love to use it.

Its is the possessive form used to show ownership, while it's means it is. Also, color needs the linking verb is before the adjective red.

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yeah, bikes are popular in our country because it's means of transportation, especially for kids who's going to school.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in our country because they are a means of transportation, especially for kids who are going to school.

Bikes is plural, so use the pronoun they instead of it's. The contraction it's means it is and cannot refer correctly to plural bikes.

22: Article errors

× Yeah, bikes are popular in our country because it's means of transportation, especially for kids who's going to school.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in our country because they are a means of transportation, especially for kids who are going to school.

The singular countable noun means needs the indefinite article a in this expression: a means of transportation.

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yeah, bikes are popular in our country because it's means of transportation, especially for kids who's going to school.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in our country because they are a means of transportation, especially for kids who are going to school.

Kids is plural, so the relative clause must use who are, not who's. Who's means who is, which does not agree with the plural subject kids.

23: Sentence without a verb

× So yeah, popular.

✓ So, yeah, they are popular.

The original expression is a sentence fragment because it does not contain a verb. Add the subject they and the verb are to form a complete sentence.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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