Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I had a bike when I was a child. It was bought by my mother, which was pink.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Many people use it to go to school or go to work. In my neighborhood, I also use it to go to school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,也提供了自行车的来源和颜色,但存在表达不自然和语法问题。第一句“Yes, of course”和第二句重复,可以合并。最后一句中“which was pink”的指代不清,而且“which”不能自然地指代自行车;建议直接说“My mother bought me a pink bike.” 还可以补充一个简单细节,例如骑车的地点或用途,使答案更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My mother bought me a pink bike when I was about seven years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答立场明确,但“it”与前面的复数主语“Many people”及概念“bikes”不一致,应改为“bikes”或“them”。“go to school or go to work”可以改为更自然的“go to school or work”。最后一句与前文重复,而且“in my neighborhood”不能准确表达骑车上学的地点;可以改为“I also ride my bike to school.” 建议加入一个具体原因,例如自行车方便、环保或适合短途出行。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and environmentally friendly. Many students ride them to school, and adults often use them for short trips to work. I also ride my bike to school because it helps me avoid traffic.
× It was bought by my mother, which was pink.
✓ It was pink, and it was bought by my mother.
“Which”在这里的指代不够清楚,容易让人误解为修饰“my mother”。将句子改为两个并列分句,可以清楚地表达自行车是粉色的,并且是妈妈买的。
× Many people use it to go to school or go to work.
✓ Many people use bikes to go to school or work.
“Many people”表示很多人,句子谈论的是自行车这一类事物,因此应使用复数名词“bikes”,而不是单数代词“it”。另外,第二个“go”可以省略,使表达更自然。
× Many people use it to go to school or go to work.
✓ Many people use them to go to school or work.
“Bikes”是复数名词,代词应使用复数形式“them”,不能使用单数形式“it”。练习时要注意名词和代词在单复数上的一致。