Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, exactly. I usually I have a bite and I usually go a bike to school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, actually I I think by is transportation popular in my countries because because I am, I often see my own on the road.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Avoid repeating “I usually” and correct the expressions “have a bite” and “go a bike.” Use “had a bike” and “rode my bike.” Add one specific detail about where or why you used it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it to school because it was faster than walking. I also enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: State your opinion clearly and avoid repeating words such as “I” and “because.” Correct “by” to “bikes,” “my countries” to “my country,” and “my own” to “many of them” or “many bikes.” Explain why bikes are popular and support your answer with a specific observation or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are inexpensive and convenient. I often see cyclists using the roads and designated bike lanes during rush hour.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes, exactly. I usually I have a bite and I usually go a bike to school.

✓ Yes, exactly. I usually had a bike, and I usually rode my bike to school.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so the verbs should be in the past tense. Use had instead of have and rode instead of go. Also, the correct expression is rode my bike, not go a bike.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, exactly. I usually I have a bite and I usually go a bike to school.

✓ Yes, exactly. I usually had a bike, and I usually rode my bike to school.

The sentence contains a repeated subject and an incorrectly structured verb phrase. Say I usually had, not I usually I have, and use the complete phrase rode my bike to school.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, actually I I think by is transportation popular in my countries because because I am, I often see my own on the road.

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are popular transportation in my country because I often see bikes on the road.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Use the singular form country because you are referring to one country. Avoid the unnecessary repeated words I and because.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, actually I I think by is transportation popular in my countries because because I am, I often see my own on the road.

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are popular transportation in my country because I often see bikes on the road.

My own cannot be used by itself in this sentence because it does not clearly identify what you see. Repeat the noun bikes or use them if the noun has already been clearly mentioned.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, actually I I think by is transportation popular in my countries because because I am, I often see my own on the road.

✓ Yes, actually, I think bikes are popular transportation in my country because I often see bikes on the road.

The sentence has repeated words and an incomplete or unclear clause. A clear structure is I think ..., because I often see .... Place the adjective before the noun in popular transportation and remove the unnecessary words I am.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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